
As he lay in his blood on the highway, with a bunch of lace at his throat
I clattered into the darkness, draped on my back was his cloak
He was a just and fair master, he loved me like one of his men
No man was more dashing than he
No lover was more loyal than he
Dearly he had loved pretty Bess, though at his feet swooned a gaggle of comely women.
Poor Bess could not overcome her grief, swung from a rope did she
I roam rudderless and forlorn, though amongst my brethren I be
‘Tis peaceful and quiet here in the meadows
But there ne’er will be a man like the highwayman
A daring and swashbuckling highwayman
Thinking of his daredevil ways, my poor heart often overflows.
Anyone who has read The Highwayman by Alfred Noyes, would know that my first line is borrowed from the poem. I know nothing about horses. The little I know, is from this poem, which is my favourite and from the novels of Dick Francis, I read as a young girl. I have written about it here.
Written for Sadje’s wdys.
What stunning emotion and imagery! I love the wistful feelings and narrative. β€
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Thanks, Jaya! β€οΈ
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A lovely take Punam! You sure you don’t know anything? Must be from your last life. ππ
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Hmm…maybe! π€πππ
Thanks, Cindy. π
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Reads like a Victorian novel – from the horse’s point of view! Love the descriptive language and the equine observations!
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Hehe, Val! Thankfully the horses can’t dispute my kind of equine observations! π
Thank you.
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This is such a beautifully written poem Punam. Reading this I was taken back centuries to olden times and the romance of a highway man and his beloved. Thanks a lot for joining in. I also loved the poem youβve mentioned.
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I am so glad I could do that, Sadje. Thanks so much and always a pleasure. β€οΈ
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Youβre most welcome my dear friend
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A Clever reply to The Highwayman.
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Thanks so much, Brandon. That’s very kind.
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Enjoyed this so much, Punam. A stirring composition. Singer Lorena McKennit put this Noyes poem to song. Have you heard it?
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You posted this before I got to it. This is how I always hear the poem in my head!
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Hi Merril, I’m not surprised. Her musical interpretations of poems seem so organic, such an amazing gift.
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Yes, you’re right. I love her Lady of Shallot, too.
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Absolutely haunting.
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I listened to that too! So good.
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That whole album is so good.
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I agree…amazing gift.
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Dora, thank you so much! Thanks a lot for sharing the song. No, I had not heard it and really enjoyed listening to it. We were taught by an Irish nun and she was so good…made us all fall in love with this poem.
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I enjoyed the way you give us a new view of a classic. (K)
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Thanks a lot, Kerfe.
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Wonderful poem, Punam! β€οΈ
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Jane, thanks so much! β€οΈ
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You are welcome, Punam!β€οΈ
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Such a creative response to the poem. I think of the song posted above, and also Anne of Green Gables reciting it. That may be where I first heard of the poem.
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Merril, thanks a lot! π We had a wonderful teacher, an Irish nun, who recited it with so much passion.
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You’re welcome!
A great teacher can make all the difference–though it does make me laugh a bit to think of a nun and that poem. π
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Haha! Yes, it was quite funny. She used to wear sarees and not a habit and would be all over place. Wonderful memories. π
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She sounds wonderful! π
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This was lovely and a sad tale for the horse. Very nicely done!
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Nancy, thank you so much.
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Absolutely love this Punam! The descriptive imagery set up a time travel device in my mind β¦ I could see and feel it all happening. Wonderfully written!! β€οΈ
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Ami, thanks so much! β€οΈπ
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You are most welcome Punam! π
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An evocative and imaginative poem, Punam! π
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! β€οΈ
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The Highwayman is a poem that remains fresh in memory even after so many years. The youthful mind had been taken by storm then. Thank you for rekindling those memories again, Punam. This poem of yours deserves, in my opinion, a standing ovation. π
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Goutam, thank you so much! I think all of us who studied in ICSE schools remember this poem very well. The lines I memorized then, I can still recite!π
Thank you so much for your kind words, I feel humbled. πππΌ
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Wow, very creative. What an interesting entry. KL β€
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Thanks a lot, KL.β€οΈ
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Hard way to end a romance… Horses of whatever size are amazng beasts!
I just finished reading a re-write of an old fairy tale… Little Red Riding hood. The end left me wanting… But at least it was a semi happy ending.
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WOW a poem that tells a story like this is NOT easy to do or something you read everyday. BEAUTIFUL work
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Thank you so much! Appreciate your kind words.
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You’re so welcome
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