
Your translucent skin astoundingly delicate
gingerly I run my fingers along the length of your tiny arms
how adorable you look curled up on your side
your toothless smile has me in raptures
my emotions palpably raw and overwhelming
I cradle tenderly your fuzz covered head
I listen awestruck to your rapid heartbeat
your petal soft cheeks I tentatively caress
your sweet breath gently tickles my neck
I dawdle over the silkiness of your dainty foot
marveling at the soot coloured lace like lashes
my eyes shimmer with joy, my heart overflows.
Written for David’s W3 on Mich’s guidelines and Eugi’s weekly prompt.
Disclaimer: The oh-so-adorable babies are teenagers now and…
Really beautiful poem that captures the innocence of an infant and the love you have for them.
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Thanks so much, Nitin. As a mother it is so easy and fulfilling to write about babies.
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Adorable infants? Enough to make you believe in God!! Great poem!!—SSW
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Absolutely! Thanks, Steven.
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my heart overflows….
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❤️
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❤️
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Punam, this is such a heartfelt and touching piece! Absolutely beautiful. Bravo!
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Thanks so much, Eugi. ❤️
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My pleasure, Punam! 💖
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One can never forget that first feeling of holding your own baby. Beautifully written Punam
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Indeed…such precious memories all parents have! Thank you. 💖
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You’re always welcome my friend
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It has been so long ago that mine were tiny newborn babies… But this poem brought it back and I could breathe in that baby powder and clean baby smell again!
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Wasn’t that fragrance heavenly, Val! Glad this took you back in time. ❤️
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Oh, how beautiful this write is. Gorgeous, Punam! ❤️
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Jeff, babies are gorgeous! Thanks so much. ❤️😊
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Yes! Indeed, they are. Most welcome, Punam. ❤️🤗
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awwwww such a tender bonding between them
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Thanks, Li. ❤️ Babies are so adorable. I am sure your grandchild makes you go aww…
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Punam, yes she does. I saw her yesterday and that’s all I do is aww ❤
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❤️❤️
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Awww, this is adorable. 🙂
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Thanks, Aishwarya. I am sure your mom has adorable memories of you. 😊❤️
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So lovely, it’s too bad the baby stage goes by so quickly.
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Too bad, indeed! Thanks, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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So beautiful and sweet! Love it 🥰
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Pamelap, thanks so much! 🥰
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You can’t beat the gorgeousness of a newborn baby! And they do grow up fast 😅
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Too fast, Ingrid! But thank god for those memories! ❤️
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Your poem makes me remember those years–mine are in their 30s now!
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It’s good to go down the memory lane to revisit precious memories, isn’t it! 😀
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Yes, it is! 😊
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awww this is an adorable piece Punam as I remember back in time.. 💖💖💖
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Glad to take you back in time, my dear! 💖💖💖
Thank you. 😊
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the words of the poem are cherry picked!
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Ah! Thanks a lot, Kunjal. ❤️
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How fragile and lovely a piece! I love the careful imagery and sharp emotion.
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Thanks a lot, Jaya. ❤️
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Such a heartfelt piece Punam and as a mother myself i felt this.
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I am so glad this resonated, Mich. Thank you.
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This was too touching. And more so because I am seeing babies everywhere these days. A little too much maybe, but they are everywhere I go 😀
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Haha! A little too much means way too much!! 😂
Thanks, Mou.
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You’ve captured this beautiful experience to the smallest detail, Punam – beautiful!
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Thanks, David. ❤️
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Punam,
Our beloved A. J. Wilson’s is hosting our W3 prompt this week – here’s the link!
❤
David
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Thanks, David. Will post my poem tonight.
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