
susurrating softly underfoot
or whooshing past at breakneck speed
clamouring for attention
always in a mad rush
refuses to stop
will not standstill
frenemy
sure is
Time
A nonet for W3. POW Britta has asked us to write about time.
susurrating softly underfoot
or whooshing past at breakneck speed
clamouring for attention
always in a mad rush
refuses to stop
will not standstill
frenemy
sure is
Time
A nonet for W3. POW Britta has asked us to write about time.
very true indeed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Christine.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Isn’t it just? 😅
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ingrid 😅
My time management sucks! 😓
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh yes, absolutely!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Radhika 👍🏼
LikeLike
Always in a mad rush😁 can understand mom’s role, Poonam ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Indeed, Jane! Thank you.
LikeLike
Welcome dear ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Truth in flowing words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Shashi.
LikeLike
Absolutely lovely.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank, Sadje.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Punam
LikeLiked by 1 person
How true, Punam. Time can be both a gift and a taskmaster! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
So it is, Cheryl!:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes I agree with you – I love living as if time doeasn’t exist, when I can 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
We have to pretend that whenever we can, isn’t it! Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love how the shape of this poem influences its emotional impact on me!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Jaya, for sharing how it impacted you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love it 🥰 and your poem really created a feel of each time moment for me!! 🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww! Thank you so much for letting me know that it resonated. xoxo
LikeLike
You can’t pin it down, that’s for sure. (K)
LikeLiked by 1 person
And still we try …
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ah! You have used one of my favorite words – susurration! I love this description of time as a frenemy.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s my favourite word too, Val! Thanks a lot.
LikeLike
A frenemy indeed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I guess we all feel the same way.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the word “susurrating “ ~ I’ve never successfully used it myself, but I just love the sound of it!
❤
David
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love it too, David, and use it whenever I get an opportunity.😊❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wise, are you. Lovely write, Punam. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, dear Jeff. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome, dear Punam. Always. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Frenemy is so true.. is that a real word Punam? 💖
LikeLiked by 1 person
It is, Cindy. It is there in the Oxford dictionary. 😉❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
oh I love it!! 💖👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLike
Punam – just wanted to let you know that this week’s W3 is now live!
Much love,
David
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, David. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’ve exploited the format well and the message is quite clear.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Feel most welcome 💖
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi, Punam! ❤
I just want to let you know that the 4th W3 prompt, hosted by Kerfe Roig, is now live:
Much love,
David
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi David. Thanks so much for the reminder. Just posted. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❣️❤️
LikeLike