
I still remember the dusky
saltiness of your satin skin
the way it turned liquid
under my warm gaze
the first time I tasted
the saltiness of love was
when I kissed your lips.
now, a solitary salt laden tear
I shed in remembrance.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, De, says: Today, I want you to sprinkle the word salt into your poems. Whether you make it the seasoned center, or just dash a smidge of it in at the last minute, just be sure some form of the word salt adds a little zing to your piece: Salty. Saltine. Salting. Saltlick. Saltatory.
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a super salty one sis 🙂
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Thanks, sis! Take it in pinches. 😉
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no way, I’ll just shuck it over my shoulder 🙂
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Good take Punam! Salty and poignant
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Thanks so much, dear Sadje.
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My pleasure
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Such a lovely response to the prompt. 💞💚💞
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Thanks a lot, Lamittan. ❤️
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Feel most welcome, my friend 💞❤💞
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Nice to hear from you as well
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oh no! you made it sad at the end 😦
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David
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Sorry! 😔
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Ooh…at first gorgeous silky description that turns into such sadness … this lovely but emotional verse seems to come so well after Dale’s, as if a continuation, but end of deep love..
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Yes, I read Dale’s…we went the opposite way! Thanks so much, Ain.
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Nice to hear from you plz
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Excellent use of the prompt word, Punam: that transformation from sweat into tears! ❤️
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Indeed, Ingrid! Thanks a lot. ❤️
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I came Punam, I read, great work my friend — but I am not well. Be back soon.
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Thanks a lot, Rob. Do take care.
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Nice to hear from you as well thanks
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Loving love turns into bitter truth. Nice take, dear Poonam! ❤️
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Thanks, dear Jane. ❤️
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Welcome dear! ❤️
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Nice to hear from you plz
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Thank you!
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This is Jonathan from Uganda a gay and sylum seeker in Kenya Refugee Camp called Kakuma Refugee Camp and I would like to have your support as well tga
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No, thank you!
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This was beautifully written, Punam. So sad that it had to end.
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Good things don’t last it seems! Thanks a lot, Dale.
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It would seem…
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Quite the sultry poem! Well done!
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Thanks, Heather!
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My pleasure.
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Brilliant take on the challenge taken, Punam and I liked the picture too.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal.
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Welcome always Punam 🙏🏼😊👍🏼
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks, Chuck.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹
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A great use of the prompt! Beautifully written!
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Thanks so much, Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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Ohhhhh. I was grooving with that sultry, salty vibe, and then such a sad ending. Well done.
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Hello
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Thanks a lot, De! Great prompt.
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I love the way the salt follows all the way from exaltation to sorrow… very well written
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Thanks a lot, Björn.
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Wow, what amazing and rendering lines in the finality of the poem! Love it. ❤
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Jaya, so appreciate it! ❤️
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It’s really amazing to here as well thanks
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Ohhh….I’m sighing here….
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I love your sighs, Z…❤️
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Wow what skill at using the propmt words in such meaningful way! You made Sad at the end of the poem so so beautfiully, it was unexpeected but landed there gently.
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Hello
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I so appreciate that you think it landed gently! Thanks so much.
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Seasoned to perfection – a little spice and a little salt to bring out the flavor!
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Val, thanks for your super comment! ❤️
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“a solitary salt laden tear” ..i so love this line Punam..
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Thanks, dear Mich!
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The sweetest things sometimes bring us the most salty tears. But the memories are worth it, I think.
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They sure are, Joy!
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Nice one 👍
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Thank you!
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I love your sighs, Z…❤️
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Exquisitely painful and so beautiful, Punam. ✨❤️
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HE’LL
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Thanks a lot, my friend. ❤️
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Nice to hear from you as well ❤
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It’s my pleasure as well to hearing from you plz
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Hello the entire families of lgbtq queer community this is Jonathan from Uganda a gay and sylum seeker in Kenya Refugee Camp called Kakuma Refugee Camp but I would like to have your support as well due to luck of safety to my life and basic needs as other thanks
For more information muhwezijonathan938@gmail.com
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Incandescent imagery! When you weave your magic, prompts have a way of coming to life, Punam.
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Aww! Thanks a lot, dear Roshni. ❤️
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