
The painstakingly painted pretty smile
struggles to sit sanguinely
on burgundy lips that hide the gnashing teeth
the turmoil within looks for a crack
the kohl rimmed eyes blink rapidly
errant tears seep within noiselessly
the carefully made bed with nary a crease
is the silent witness to
what will remain under covers
the moon bedecked in borrowed finery
keeps a tacit eye on the shenanigans
of the devious dark night
tranquil morning hides pewter smudges
behind powder-pink daubs of clouds
sun shines fiercely, unconcerned.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Lillian, says:
For today’s prompt, I’d like you to consider one of the adages/proverbs listed below as inspiration for your poem. You don’t have to include the line itself….but we should be able to guess pretty easily, which line you used as a jumping off point to create your poem. Do give the line and its source at the end of your poem, and of course, mention the poem is written for dVerse.
- “Many hands make light work.” Adagia
- “An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
- “Fish and visitors stink after three days.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
- “To err is human, to repent divine, to persist devilish.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
- “Things are not always what they seem.” Bee-Keeper and the Bees” from Aesop’s Fables
- “The truth shall set you free.” John 8:32
- “To everything there is a season.” Ecclesiastes 3:1
- “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re going to get.” Forrest Gump, the movie.
What you didn’t say in this poem was awesome! The elegantly hinted at nuances tell a sad tale.
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Aapa, thanks for your beautiful words. ❤️
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You’re always welcome my dear
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No matter how you tried, so hard to, hide the pain, it always, gets, out, so, it’s best, to not hide it, and just, let it come out from the start…
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I agree…
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cool 😎😎
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Thanks, Jim.
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You always nail the dverse prompts Punam..
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Thanks a lot, dear Mich.
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Every style suits you, and that’s a fact.
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Bo, you know how to make my day! Thank you.
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Wonderful imagery and description!
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Thanks, Lamittan!
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Welcome, dear.
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The sun doesn’t care…cause the sun just slides away, and only smiles…powerful description and powerful mood in your verse, a wonderful poem to read aloud, with the particular sounds you put in with your words….I do like reading your poetry!..even poems hiding sadness and desperation…
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Ain, sometimes your comments render me speechless! I don’t know how to react to such beautiful words. Please make do with a simple thank you.
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Tut tut..thanking you is my job, the poetry you write is the origin of the comments. Really.
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Great use of the prompt! Love this one.
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Thanks, Val!
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Fabulous prompt taken, Punam. The picture too is perfect.
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Kamal, always appreciate your words. Thank you. 😊
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Most welcome Punam 💖😊😊❤️
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Great write for the line. “burgundy lips that hide the gnashing teeth” oooh….this says it all. Especially love the imagery in the last stanza.
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Thanks so much, Lillian. Really inspiring prompt.
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This is gorgeously rendered, Punam! I especially love; “the moon bedecked in borrowed finery keeps a tacit eye on the shenanigans of the devious dark night.”💝💝
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Thanks so much, dear Sanaa! 💖💖
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I love how you describe the surface, just hinting that there is more underneath. I feel the tension of something waiting to come out.
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I am glad that came through.
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John 8:32 is amazing scripture and true.
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So it is.
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I truly admire your talent of imagery with words and with using the prompts to create such elaborate and exquisite beautiful poetry.
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Pragalbha, always moved by your loving words. Thanks, my friend. 🙏🏼❤️
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I feel the anguish of the person who tries to put on a happy face to the world. The hidden “pewter smudges” tells the story for me. I hope she may leave dark night behind soon. Beautiful poem with sad content.
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That her anguish came through is heartening. Thanks so much, dear Li. ❤️
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Yes it did ❤ You are welcome, Punam.
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Wowza…knock-me-over good once again!!
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❤️🙏🏼💖
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🤗
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Wonderful wordplay here Punam! ❤️
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! ❤️
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Wow! What an amazing piece, Punam! Wonderful take on the prompt!
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Thanks so much, dear Eugi! ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam!
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Wondrous! Apt use of the proverb 🙂
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Thanks so much, Veera! ❤️
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😍😍😍
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🥰🥰
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Beautifully written, Punam. The imagery says so much and makes the imagination wonder what went on the “dark devious night” before. I also loved:
“tranquil morning hides pewter smudges
behind powder-pink daubs of clouds
sun shines fiercely, unconcerned.”
❤
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Thanks so much, Sunra! I am so glad you liked the last stanza. ❤️
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“the turmoil within looks for a crack
the kohl rimmed eyes blink rapidly
errant tears seep within noiselessly” Master poet, are you. This is stunning, my dear Punam. ❤️
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Jeff, always appreciate your beautiful words! Thanks so much, my friend. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Punam. Always! ❤️
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perfect expression of DV where it’s all hidden and darkness simmers only leading downhill … great wordsmithing sis!
Seems not all your articles are coming into my reader, no idea how that’s happening
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Thanks so much, sis.
That happens with me too when I am away for a few days.
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now its a very dubious internet connection, happened when I was in a flood area before, no idea why.
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Internet works in strange ways!
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so many complaints about the distress it’s causing that it’s on the news and providers have given us more GB but that only helps if it works!
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There is sorrow and helplessness but powerful pack, dear Poonam. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Jane. ❤️
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Welcome, dear Poonam! ❤️
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the pain leaking in between these lines are so palpable, Poonam. Great job.
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Thanks so much, Rosema.
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