The vortex of living sucks me in feet first
though I duck, I still bump my head
feeling giddy and sometimes bewildered
trying to catch my out of breath, breath
I wish, at least for a while,
everything would come to a standstill
frozen, suspended in time
for me to hold life in my palms
to bask in the sunlight
to soak in the moonbeams
to gather nebulae in my arms
to plant dreams next to the lilies and not the roses
to save them from being snagged by the thorns
and then check my manual
on how to surpass obstacles strewn around
but life like a circle in a spiral, spins relentlessly
all notions of stability are turned upside down
whether I keep pace or fall by the wayside
I resign myself to being led by it
for life has a deadline to meet
‘cos if it were to stop, so would renewal!
https://amanpan.com/2020/05/25/eugis-weekly-prompt-renewal-may-25-2020/
Beautiful Punam.
xoxo
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Thanks a lot, dear Gabriela. ❤️
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My pleasure sweetheart ❤️
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I wish it too at times.
my out of breath, breath..Loved this.
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It is suffocating at times, isn’t it!
Thanks, dear.
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Very.
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Brilliant!
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Brilliant piece, Punam! The more I read it the more I love it. You speak many truths in this piece. Thank you for participating.
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Thanks a lot, dear! 🙏🏼
Always a pleasure to participate. 😊
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Most welcome and always a pleasure to have you! 😉
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Honest and affirming, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Li. 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful punam
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Thanks Deepu.
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do mothers ever stand still … ❤
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Lol Kate! 😅❤️
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I love to soak in moonbeams too Punam. Thanks for joining in 😀
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Ah, great! 😀
My pleasure, Brian.
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And so I say…. Bring it on!
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Yeah! Bring it on, indeed!
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Yes, yes, yes!! This is me every day! I LOVE the “Vortex of living” – you capture it so beautifully even if the every day living of it is not as beautiful.
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Ahhh! I knew you would understand this so well!! Thanks a lot, Irma.
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Great lines and just such a clever, clever poem.
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Thanks a lot, Watt.
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My pleasure.
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WOW WOW WOW and a Wowza–so good, Punam!
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Oh, my!! THANK you so much, dear L. I am over the moon with your praise. 💞🌷
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Good! Now, careful you don’t fall and injure yourself on the sharp point of the crescent moon 🙂
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Yes, ma’am! Thanks for the reminder, ma’am. 😉❤️
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Hahaha! You’re both lovely and cute! 🙂
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😎🙏🏼❤️
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💖
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Beautifully written punam
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Thanks a lot, Jude. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure 🌼💛
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you summed up the life atrocities and love so beautifully
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Thank you so much, Shantanu.
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My pleasure
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Life, I had to read each line two times, I had to pause, and then read again, finally it seeped within me.. exactly how every good poetry should. Proud of you..my friend.
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Aww! Sangeeta sweetheart, that is music to my heart. Thank you so much, dear friend! ❤️
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Ahhhh Punam…you said it so well…🤗
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Beautiful poem. True. If death stops, so would the renewal.
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Thank you so much, Satyen.
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Welcome.
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You had me from the “vortex of living” where I was sucked in, feet first, living the very notions your poem so beautifully conveys .
Your metaphors are incredible ❤️❤️
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Despite the fact that lockdown has me at home all the time, I find I hardly have time for myself! Phew!
It is heartening to know my words could make you feel what I am feeling. I am always touched beyond words by your compliments. ❤️❤️
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