Outrageously overdressed metaphors
masquerading as surreal images
line blank pages after pages
strutting saucily as if on a catwalk
shining gaudily in profanity
bizzarely thinking it would sanctify
the blasphemous thoughts they were harbouring
believing fervently in this carefully constructed chimera
the urge to be in the limelight so strong
ignoring common sense tapping at the elbow
the fear of simplicity, of ordinary
forcing them to take cover
in the euphemistic poetic devices
clouding the truth in layers of balderdash.
This is bloody brilliant.
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Oh! Thank you. Means a lot.
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Bloody brilliant is an understatement.
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Oh my! Thanks a lot. Truly appreciate it.
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Woaahh that word play👌
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Thank you so much, dear Sakshi. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure
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Giving life to your words!
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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Always a pleasure.
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How do you do this!
This is truly beyond brilliant 👏👏👏
When I meet you mere sir pe bhi haath rakh Dena🙏❤️🤗
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Yasmin.. 🙏🏼
Thank you so, so much, my friend. Sir par haath thodi rakhoongi…gale lagoongi. 🤗💞
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you are the wordsmith master! Unreal …
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Thank you so much… 🙏🏼
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my sincere pleasure!
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❤️
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a mouthful of words Punam, tasty morsels of poetic delight
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I like how you put it… thanks, my dear Gina.
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Pleasure all mine dear 😘😘
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🤗❤️
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the bane of poets and philosophers, so beautifully expressed that I itch to join in and say that the brilliance of the swinging tassels that go with the ostentatious words these great people parade to obfuscate their lack of understanding, usually ends up lighting the minds of the readers who long for sophistication. and the ones who know the answers, express it without the fanfare thereby making it seem too trite to be heeded.
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Gosh ESP! Your comment is even better than my poem. Thanks for adding your insight. ❤️
I was reading some poems yesterday and was blown away by their simplicity.
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thanks, but better than your poem, no it is not. lets be objective and agree on simplicity, it is a difficult feat though because most of our ideas don’t come with accompanying words, ineffable as they say. You do a good job of it when you dont get carried away with the prompts.
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Okayyy. Thank you. I accept what you say.
Hey, are you trying to say prompts impinge my writing? 🤔
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not me but the jealous me, that you keep forgetting
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Is there a third one too besides the you and the jealous you? 😂
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yes, the judged me
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Ahh! I guess that is in addition to the poet you, movie critic you, story writer you, essayist you, romantic you, waiting for godot you…
Next time we are in conversation, please remind me which ‘you’ I am talking too so that there is no faux pas.
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with you mostly the jealous me 😍
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😂❤️
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