I was mesmerised by the extravaganza
of the raibow hued dreams
that you beguilingly spun
my eyes a receptacle of the
brilliant colours you mixed
each colour branding various parts of me
and I happily became your canvas
alas! the colours were not fast
some bled, some faded away
I am now an unrequited, discoloured rag
cast aside with disdain
let me disabuse you of the notion
that I am now moribund
if only you had seen
beyond my satin smooth skin
you might have noticed my spine of steel
I was resolute when I loved you against all odds
I am resolute about taking care of myself.
Wow this was deep. But its true, people can’t see beyond the surface. This relates to my experience now. Beautifully written. I felt the poem.
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Thank you so much, dear. Your words here mean a lot. I am sorry that it happened to you too, but I hope that you can relate to the ending too.
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Yes. Don’t underestimate ones strength.
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Exactly!
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Nailed it! 🙌🏽😆
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Thank you so much! ❤️
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You’re welcome
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Self always needs to come first. Especially in the world we live in today.
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Yes, indeed! Only if we can take care of ourselves, can we take care of others. Thanks a lot, Andrew.
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We can never truly find love if we don’t love ourselves first.
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Totally agree!
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Brilliant!
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Thanks Sadje!
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A pleasure!
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‘You might have noticed my spine of steel’ I love this line! ❤️ Wonderful Punam 🙂
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Thank you, dear Christine! 🙂💞
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Brilliantly penned!❤️
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Thanks a lot, Richa. 💞
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Absolutely brilliant – the colors of love, the mesmerizing verse but not without resolute of taking care of self
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Thank you kindly, Shantanu! Much appreciated. 😊
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My pleasure always
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Yes to that. Perfect ending.
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No one can love us more than us! Thanks Bo.
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True.
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It’s easy to be blinded by that extravaganza and charm and lose sight of yourself. The way you depicted this and the strength of self triumphant at the end – brilliant! ❤️❤️
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You are right, we often get blinded by the razzmatazz! Thank you so much, dear. ❤️❤️
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❤️❤️
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Lots of emotions and metaphors weaving through this, Punam. Personal empowerment stands strong. Wonderful writing.
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This is power packed……. empowering and expresses strength
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Thanks a lot, Sakshi. ❤️
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My pleasure
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Lovely poem, one needs to find the steel beneath, it’s invariably there. But, satin smooth skin? not all..
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Thanks ESP. And we have to find that steel ourselves!
I guess I will have to agree with you about the satin smooth skin…definitely not all! 😂😂
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well painted, we all have a steel spine when it’s called for …
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Yes, most of us do…and thank god for that! Thanks Kate. ❤️
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you express it so vividly 🙂
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🙂
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I love this reminder to not forget about ourselves when in the midst of a relationship. The colors others have may dazzle us but we can’t forget the beauty we inherently hold. Wonderfully written!
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Indeed Irma! We should never lose our essence in any relationship. Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome! Advice beautifully written!
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Thank you!
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Always happy to share your words with followers!!!
xoxo
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Wow! Powerful!!
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I am glad you think so! 🤗❤️
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🤗❤️
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