They stood amidst a sea of people
Acutely aware of each other’s presence
The garden themed party had a laidback feel
But under each other’s scrutiny they felt electrified
There was explicit emotion in his direct gaze
Her sideways glance indicated her tacit desire
It was as if no one else around existed
And their eyes tangoed with each other’s.
Brilliant.
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome
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A most beautiful dance of words. It’s true, when eyes meet and begin to tango, no one else in the room exists.
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Thank you so much, Inky. Yes, indeed.
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You’re kindly welcome, Punam.
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Superb!🙌
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Thank you! 🙌😊
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i am taken to the garden of great gatsby’s party and love in an era i want to live in, so beautiful Punam
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Ah! How nice! 😊 Thank you, dear Gina.
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a pleasure , i love that era, the dresses and the music and the dashing men!
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Ah, yes! Truly an enchanting era!
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Love this! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Of course 😄
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much, my friend! 💖
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My pleasure
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Your words are perfectly dancing together Punam..
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That’s so sweet of you to say, Mich. Thank you so much.
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😲🤐😇😘💕
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😎☺️😂💞
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masterfully written,
a tango = fully dressed sex …
that the eyes could do it to the exclusion of all argh … 🙂
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Ah! Kate…thank you so much! You made me blush. ☺️
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lol well you can hardly deny it 😉
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😀😉
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[wink wink]
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You sure know the art of flirting! It is all in the eyes…such a romantic vignette!
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Thank you so much, Irma. My words know the art of flirting…sadly in my youth, I did not! 😂
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Flirting is best done by those who have spent years mastering the Art….it is wasted on youth!
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Ah! So you mean I am peaking just at the right time! 😎😎
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Definitely! The best is yet to come! 😉
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Masterfully penned, My Dear! Really loved your lines – “It was as if no one else around existed
And their eyes tangoed with each other’s.”
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Aww! Thank you so much Chuck. Truly appreciated.
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OMG this takes me back to a childhood crush and how we’d make eye contact across the room and I could feel myself blush, quickly looking away as swarms of butterflies danced in my tummy, my palms grew sweaty, and my heart began to race…mixed feelings running like electric currents coursing through me…excitement that he was looking at me, embarrassment that he caught me looking at him, and curiosity wondering if he liked me too. 😁😘
Wonderful play of emotions and sensory delights my dear!🤗 💞
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How wonderful of you to share this, Jenna. I am smiling as I read this and can very well imagine you blushing…how sweet! 💖
Thank you ever so much, my dear. 🤗💞
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Awww you’re welcome Punam, it’s a very sweet poem my dear!😊 🤗 💞
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💖
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you.
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I would love tango more now😍😍😍
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Ah! 😊 Thank you so much, dear! ❤️
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Electrifying – when old souls meet
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Yes!! 😊 Thank you.
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You are welcome
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Beautiful words that bring back memories of my youth and going to a dance.
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I am delighted my words did that! Thank you so much.
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You’re most welcome.
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