Amidst the downtime that he thought he was enjoying
it called out to him intermittently at first
he brushed it aside as his mind playing tricks
when he heard the sweet song of sirens!
disregarding it, he busied himself fixing things
but it became incessant, as time went by
the roar and the quiet of the surf crashing all around him
waking him in the middle of the night
keeping him on tenterhooks
he looked at the woman lying next to him
her arm curled around his waist
a serene, sweet look on her face,
oblivious to his burgeoning turmoil
unaware that the sea was serenading him
inveigling him surreptitiously
torn between the two, he felt helpless
like watching sand slip through fingers
a heavy weight keeping him anchored
while his soul was writhing to experience
the salt spray on his face, the cool breeze in his hair
as well as the white crested cyan expanse around him
away from the quotidian caterwauling
into the serene tranquility and the company of the porpoises,
oh, the porpoises!
beckoning him and enticing him
bit by bit he was like the living dead
she noticed the faraway look in his eyes
suddenly in the throes of passion
his withdrawal and his cacophonous silence
she did not want to live a half life
with the shell of the man she loved
thus she released him
to go back into the arms of his first love
The sea.
Written for Kate’s Friday fun.
I often write about the sea’s firm grasp. Don’t know, there’s sth about the sea.
Loved this, Punam.
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I totally agree, Bo. It has a very firm grasp and I am experiencing its unfathomable lure.
Thanks so much.
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Mindblowing Punam !! ❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear Nima! So good to see you here. ❤️
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You are welcome Punam 😊
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Very evocative poem Punam
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re welcome my friend
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That serenade of the sea…. she is an irresistible mistress. You describe it so beautifully, the calling… ❤️❤️
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So she is, Rachel…
I have seen her calling and all I can do is see my man surrender to it and accept it. 🙂
Thanks so much, dear. ❤️❤️
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❤️❤️
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Wow. beautiful!! How do I improve my vocabulary? I’m always impressed by yours?? Is there a specific diet for it?
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Thank you so much, Satyen. Read, read and read more. Books is the only diet…lol.
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A beautiful ode to our wondrous ocean….. her magnificence shall shall always a part of me… 🌏🌏💙💙
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Thanks, Ivor! You are so lucky to live so close to it. 💙
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Although lately my beach visits have been very limited (Iso)
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I know. But you know it is there…close by .
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powerful tribute to your true love … adds a depth of emotion, thanks sis!
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Thanks a lot, Kate and my pleasure!
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“cacophonous silence” great term, Punam. I can feel the ache of the human woman and the anguish of the man, torn between his wife and his mistress, the sea…
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Thanks so much, Li. I am glad that anguish and turmoil could be felt. Much appreciate your feedback.
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You’re welcome.
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Seems that is the age old story of the lure of the sea. It is said that once you have been rocked in the bosom of the deep you will never be able to resist the call to come home…
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That is so true! The lure of the sea is irresistible.
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Oh my Punam. I have no words. This was brilliant🌀🌀
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Thanks a lot, sweetheart! Much appreciated. ❤️
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My pleasure💕❤❤
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thus she released him
to go back into the arms of his first love
The sea.
Needs real courage
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Love gives courage…
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Sensual and wistful
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Thanks a lot, Jude.
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My pleasure Punam
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return to his first love – what a sacrifice she was willing to make -she truly loves him
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That is what true love is all about, isn’t it!
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most surely – like the saying – if you love him/her…let her/him go –
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Absolutely…he/she will come back… 🙂
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Oh gosh, 5-Star-WOW’s, Punam. You just keep exceeding Excellence. This was breathtaking. Impossible to choose a fave line or phrase…but I haven’t given you one in awhile so I’ll pick, “cacophonous silence”–wowza!
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Oh, my! Your words are so precious, dear L! So appreciate your praise and encouragement. ❤️🌷
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My pleasure totally!
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Beautiful story of true love… your collection of vocabulary is fantastic Punam. I had to look up for the meaning of a few 😀
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Thanks a lot, Radhika. You are too kind. ❤️😀
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What an amazing ode – beautifully written
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Thanks a lot, Shantanu.
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My absolute pleasure
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Stunning writing. Beautiful description.
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Thanks so much! ❤️
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My pleasure 🙂 🙂
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Very seductive. I could feel the yearning. Love, “quotidian caterwauling”
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation!
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Oh wow…i can feel the sea…and i can see it right through your words Punam..💕💕💕
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Ah! Thanks a lot, dear Mich! ❤️💞
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I think many a ‘navy’ man feels such. I have always loved the oceans waters myself.
One reason our home on the edge of a suburban development has a little creek on the back border.
Not quite the salted sea, but water is water 😉
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Yes, most ‘navy’ men feel like this!
Water, sure is water! 😀
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Could be that I have a water sun-sign.
I’d still be a rebel mer-person though.
I’ve always thought if I could breathe under water that is where I’d be living… at least part of the time 😉
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Ah! A water sun-sign would have an affinity for water! Won’t staying in water be splendid, except for the wrinkled skin!😉😀
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I’ve got enough laugh(life) lines now… so extra wrinkles wouldn’t bother me 😀
Besides I think you’d only get wrinkly when you get out of the water…
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Haha! True that! 😀
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Much obliged!
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My pleasure!
xoxo
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enjoy https://ecocouple.blog/2020/08/21/surf-reduce-reuse-recycle-lets-do-this/
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