Our prompt for the day (optional as always) asks you to peruse the work of one or more of these twitter bots, and use a line or two, or a phrase or even a word that stands out to you, as the seed for your own poem.
I take my inspiration today from:
I think I may rise out of bed today
a futile wrangle with the tangle of sheets ensues
the din in my head has dulled the colours of my mind
I don’t know where the sunshine has disappeared
I fall back again, unable to bear the weight of existing
as the strands of my mind unspool in untidy heaps
it is no surprise my once graceful thoughts
are in shambolic shambles,
but they are hardly contrite as they hurtle me
spiralling crazily down an abyss
perspicacity, the hallmark of my sharp mind
hunkers in dark, musty alleys of despair
there is no neon sign to tell me where I am
no light at the end of this never-ending tunnel
as I pull the sheet over my head
a sweet sound knocks at my dithering consciousness
lethargy pins my limbs immobile
but the persistent magpie robin perches on my balcony
calling me in dulcet, captivating tones
clarity descends on me removing all veils of uncertainty
at this precise moment I know where I am
and ready to start my journey all over again.
https://amanpan.com/2020/04/06/eugis-weekly-prompt-captivating-april-6-2020/
https://godoggocafe.com/2020/04/07/tuesday-writing-prompt-challenge-april-7-2020/
I love this poetic journey of yours.
Thanks for including my prompt Punam.
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Thank you so much and always a pleasure, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome. 🙏🙏🙏
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Beautiful poem 💕
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Thank you so much, my dear! Hope you are well. ❤️🌷
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My pleasure sweetheart. I am and I hope you are too 🌸
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❤️🌷
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🙏💕
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I’m really impressed that you combined so many prompts into one poem.
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Thank you kindly. I enjoyed putting them together.
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Interesting.
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Thank you!
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❤ I can relate to this very much. Those tiny messengers, angels in disguise, that rally our spirits.
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Thank you so much, Li. They truly are angels in disguise. ❤️
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Yes they are. You inspired the poem I just posted.
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Oh wow! Will read it right away. ❤️
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🙂
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wow masterfully written … please link this to my ‘clarity’ prompt too Punam, I love it ❤
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Thank you so much, my dear Kate. Have linked with your prompt, thanks for reminding. ❤️
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no prob sis, keep shining ❤
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Oh my this is FINE!!
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Thank you kindly, my dear!
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You are so welcome always, my pleasure!
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❤️
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💖
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I especially like the line “No neon light to tell me where I am.”
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Thank you so much, Reena.
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I could just stay in bed. Very relatable, Punam.
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Tracy, I can’t tell you how relieved I feel to know I am not alone. Thank you, my dear. ❤️
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You are not, Punam. Hugs.
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Just amazing💖
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Thank you so much, dear Ishita. ❤️
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Wow ! What a beautiful articulation ❤
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Thank you so much, my dear. Glad you liked it. ❤️
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Gorgeous.
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Thanks, dear Bo.
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Oh the last two lines so full of hope! Beautiful, Punam.😊💓
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Thanks a lot, dear Nina. 😊
I hope you are feeling better. ❤️
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Yes! Salt water gargling helps! 😊💓
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Great! 🙏🏼😊❤️
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Your use of language is amazing! Beautifully penned Puinam 🥰
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Thanks a lot, dear Christine. 🙂💞
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A true masterpiece, my friend, and you took on all prompts with ease. Thank you for participating in my prompt, Punam.
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Aww! I am humbled that you think so! Thank you so much and my pleasure, Eugenia. ❤️
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My pleasure!
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i take – I know where I am, that sense of just being .
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Wow, Punam! Everything everyone said above plus hearts and stars for this poem! ❤️❤️❤️🌟🌟🌟
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Aww! Irma, thank you! 💖💖
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This is beautiful. I love the language which has more than a nod to the tragic Sylvia Plath. I creative tribute.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Chris. That was exactly my intention.
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I happy that bird’s captivating call pulled you out of that state of mind. Our brains seem to become cluttered or disarranged. I find things slip my mind more and more which is quite frustrating. Good poetic expressions. Stay heathy!
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Unable to bear the weight of existing… damn! 😉😅 so true!! Where’s my bed?
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Just behind you! There. Are you comfortable now? Rest is best, my dear. 😂😂
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Haha 😂
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