Roused by the tender tickling of the tenuous sun
she stumbled out in the blush pink dawn
hoping to be caressed by its velvety, amber warmth
she ambled on the empty streets in the search of morn
but silvery ponderous puffs invaded the skies
she wandered wilted and was woebegone
twisting the tendrils of tensile hope
she asked the soaring eagles where the sun had gone
the labouring squirrels too had no answer
they were busy rooting around in the lawn
desperate and dismayed she continued to look over the horizon
but her eyes met the dusky grey curtains drawn
wearily she traced her footsteps back
chasing dreams leaving her dispirited and withdrawn
she opened her palm to let her yearning slip by
slipped under covers with a tired yawn
another day, another desire, she won’t give up that easily
to dream and chase them, she was born.
Take your time Punam..
This is yet again another beautiful poem..
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Thank you so much, Mich for being here always.
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Welcome back and relax. You have been missed.
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That sure feels good! Thanks a lot, dear.
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Good one!
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Thanks Sadje.
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You’re welcome 😉
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Nothing to forgive. You have to things at your own pace.
And this poem was Stunning in its gentleness and emotions xxxx
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Aww! Thanks a lot, my dear.❤️ Yes, doing things at my pace but an apology is warranted to those who have been visiting my blog and leaving kind words.
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So delicately drawn are your beautiful words and message my dear Punam. We should never forsake our dreams even as it seems the days sometimes seem to get away from us. 😊💗🤗💞
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Thank you so much for your wonderful appreciation, dear Jenna! You are right, we should not give up our dreams. ❤️🤗💖😊
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You’re so welcome Punam my dear! 🤗 💞😊❤️
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Those squirrels rooting around in the lawn never seem to be much help.
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You are so right, Jim! Nonetheless I love watching them.
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Chasing dreams.
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Yes…sometimes futile, sometimes worth all the trouble!
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Absolutely!
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I like how the alliteration built some wonderful imagery.
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Ahh! Thank you so much.
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A pleasure!
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This is a beautiful poem Punam, I really felt that search for the sun, and the images of it hiding are stunning. Great metaphor for chasing our dreams, and message to never give up even if some days we feel dispirited. Hope you are well ❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Rachel. We spend so much time chasing dreams but some remain attainable. Still, the ones that are fulfilled make our life worthwhile. I am well, dear, just a tad tired. ❤️❤️
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Awww. Wishing sleep and rest for you then ❤️❤️
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❤️❤️
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Oh WOW, of course I LOVE this poem!! This is my fave pick: “silvery ponderous puffs invaded the skies
she wandered wilted and was woebegone
twisting the tendrils of tensile hope”. Lots of love ❤
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!!🙂❤️
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Welcome, welcome, welcome! 🙂 ❤
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I was very moved by your poem, Punam. Welcome back.
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Thank you so much, Tracy, on both counts.
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Welcome.
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Beautiful imagery with a strong message. This one is another brilliant piece from your repertoire Punam!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Radhika. Means a lot.
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Love this poem..Punam♥️.. absolutely beautiful..
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Thank you so much, Sarika dear! ❤️
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😊🤗
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This is beautiful. Nice use of alliteration
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Thanks a lot, dear.
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great imagery, it’s beautiful 🙂
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Thanks a lot, dear! 🙂
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welcome precious 🙂
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I so love the she you described here. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Shantanu.
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My pleasure always ❤️
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Oh my, beautiful Punam my dear! 🤗 💞 ✨🌞✨
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Haha..I just realized this was a beautiful post you wrote almost a year ago, and it was just as powerful for me the second time around! 😊 🥰
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I am so glad you enjoyed it, Jenna. 🥰🤗❤️
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You’re a gifted poet Punam my dear. 🤗 🥰❤️
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🙏🏼🤗🥰
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