Pain travels strangely in a non- linear way
its trajectory unpredictable
when my syncopated heart broke
it kept on beating steadily
it was the gut that sucked the air out of my lungs
your pain travels across the oceans
and wraps itself tightly across my chest
I feel a dull ache in my heart
words end up hurting the most
spoken words; like the man in the well of death,
vroom round and round in my head
till I scream in anguish
written words haunt my dreams in monochrome
blurring my eyes with sleeplessness
I did try to befriend pain but gave up
fighting it gives a purpose to my life.
Profound and haunting
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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very haunting, sorry you had cross words … heal quickly!
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Thank you so much, Kate.
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hugs ❤
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Aww! Hugs to you too ❤️
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I like this a lot. It’s. It’s full of emotions and I feel your pain 😢❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear. That’s very kind of you. 💞
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A better command of English than most Americans. Great poem!
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Aww Paul! That is very humbling. Thanks a lot.
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Heartfelt, touching ❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear.
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You’re welcome
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Oh Punam. This is so so beautiful. And heartbreaking. I can imagine you would never stop fighting pain…
I LOVE these lines:
when my syncopated heart broke
it kept on beating steadily
it was the gut that sucked the air out of my lungs
your pain travels across the oceans
and wraps itself tightly across my chest
Wow.
❤️❤️
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Aww! Thank you so much Rachel. You try to put away the pain and get on with life but sometimes a word or a small incident can bring back all the pain. So one fights pain all over…again.
Thank you so much once again. Your wow says it all. ❤️❤️
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I hope that it is put to rest soon ❤️❤️
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It is. ❤️❤️
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I hope my wow did say a lot because this poem was truly magnificent ❤️❤️
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Oh yes, my dear, it did! Thank you once again. 🤗❤️❤️
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Beautifully expressed Punam.
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Thank you so much, dear.
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Hugs my dearest Punam, your pain so heartbreaking and beautifully expressed! ❤️❤️❤️
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Aww! Thank you so much for your kind words and hugs, my dear. Most needed. ❤️❤️🤗
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You’re so welcome my dear. 😊 ❤️🤗💞
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❤️😘
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A wonderful treatment of a topic that is so personal, I guess the beauty of a poem lies in its novelty, but one that is followed by a familiarity, of discovering something that you always believed in and now you acknowledge it.
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Thank you so much ESP. It is a very familiar topic as we all go through it. How it affects each one of us is unique and therein lies the novelty.
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When someone write about Love ,many can relate but when they write about Pain everyone can relate to it.Same goes for your poem.Its as profound as the feeling of pain and like always you have expressed it the best❤️
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Aww! Thank you so much, Yasmin, for your beautiful observation. 🙏🏼❤️
I hope the month of Ramzaan was good and Eid Mubarak, my dearest friend. 🤗❤️
So good to see you back. 😘
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Eid Mubarak 🤗🤗🤗
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Khair Mubarak. 🤗🤗
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You personified pain – what a beautiful creation
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Thank you so much, dear!
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My absolute pleasure
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