overshadowing the truth
stealthily, slinky shadows stalk
the reality that is diminished
by distortion looming large
the jaded glory of veracity
fades
in the razzle-dazzle of swirling chaos of make believe
a fool and her folly can ne’er be separated
she’s blinded by the warped reflection in the false mirror.
Written for Sadje’s wdys, Eugi’s moonwashed weekly prompt, David’s W3 and dVerse OLN mini prompt.
W3 POW, Ben Tonkin says, “From free verse to haiku…
This ‘folly’, be up to you!
Can’t wait to read how you do.
Your inspiration is ‘folly’.”
Grace, our host at dVerse, says “the optional mini-prompt is to write a poem about the painting or use the title of the art work: The False Mirror, or both.” I have used the title.
Sadly, it is a folly to believe it is true, when its wrapped in a false mirror. Easier said than done when its hard to separate truth from lies.
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Indeed, Grace. Very difficult these days.
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Maybe we prefer to believe in the folly because facing the truth would be too hard…
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Indeed, it is so but it must be faced or we are doomed.
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ah we are as make believe as our shadows
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Absolutely, Laura!
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I love your wordplay and interpretation of this image, especially in that first couplet ❤️
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Thanks so much, Sunra. ❤️
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Brilliantly written, Punam. I loved the alliteration in the second line, as well as “the jaded glory of veracity fades”
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So glad you enjoyed it, Nicole. Much appreciated.
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That image works so well with your poem. I get weary of “bigger and better” “new and improved” etc., especially when they are an illusion that grows into insignificance.
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Same here, Li.
I am happy you liked it. 🙂
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a profound message through your words, Punam 🙏🌷
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Thanks so much, dear Destiny. ❤️
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my pleasure 🌷🤍
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Wow and excellent combination of prompts. Skillfully done.
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Suzette, I am so happy you liked it. Thanks so much.
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I enjoyed the line “the razzle-dazzle of swirling chaos of make believe”
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So glad you liked that, Maria.
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Those shadows loom large and often do overtake reality as we cling desperately to our follies. I like the way you’ve taken the funhouse image and given it depth. (K)
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That’s very true. Thanks, Kerfe.
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A very accurate and apt description of a fool here Punam. Loved this wonderful poem my friend. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks so much, Sadje.❤️ My pleasure.
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Most welcome dear sis
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Punam the alliteration is superb! All these prompts work so well together! <3
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Thanks so much, Val.
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awesome depth/layers here sis …Bjorn’s comment nailed it … easy to believe the folly than look deeper!
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Thanks a lot, sis.
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A great image and poem about needing to do a double-take on what we think we see…
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Thanks, Andrew.
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Ooh. Lovely depiction of lie vs truth ❤️ I love unique blend of prompts!
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Thanks, Aboli. Much appreciated. ❤️
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Beautiful blending of prompts, Punam, and wonderful wordplay. I feel we believe in folly to escape what we don’t want to know.
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Yes, that’s very true. Thanks so much, Eugi.
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You’re welcome, Punam.
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Wonderful mash-up. I love the lines
the jaded glory of veracity
fades
in the razzle-dazzle of swirling chaos of make believe
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Reena, thanks a lot. Much appreciated.
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” swirling chaos of make believe” .. ah yes. You described it well.
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Helen, thanks so much.
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A brilliant poem – and what a photo!
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Thanks a lot, Kim.
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Stop and Reflect – a very thought-provoking take.
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Thanks a lot, Ben. An interesting prompt.
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Apt poem for an apt picture Punam. Profound and deep poem.
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Kamal, thanks so much.
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Always welcome 🤗🤗🤗
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The alliteration in the first stanza really sets a tone. Sadly, some have no choice but to live in the shadows of reality, at no folly of their own, but then there are others…..
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Yes, there are always others…
Thanks so much, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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Brilliant, Punam!
❤
David
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David, thank you! 🙏🏼❤️
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“a fool and her folly can ne’er be separated
she’s blinded by the warped reflection in the false mirror.”
Aptly said. 🙂
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Thanks, Aishwarya.
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Excellent, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Chris.
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Excellent poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Indira.
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The Jaded glory of veracity……..now that’s good! JIM
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Jim, thank you!
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Hi, Punam 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by Destiny of ‘Destiny’s Designz’ is now live!
Enjoy!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/05/01/w3-prompt-105-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Hi David. Thanks for the heads up. Will check soon.
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*hug*
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🤗
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