Moon-drenched, the silvery sea shimmers
the tide tiptoes, sombre and foreboding
carrying messages from beyond the horizon
the waves hurl themselves with suddenness
my toes curl at the salty sting of lashing water
the sea rushes to erase
all that was written on the sand
leaving behind broken sea-shells, water-logged sandcastles
and my unquiet heart grieves
at the whiff of remembered citrusy-pepper notes.
Written for David’s W3 where POW Sarah, invites us to
- Compose an ekphrastic poem inspired by any image of a body of water (ocean, waterfall, lake, etc.). The image you select may be a photo you have taken, art you have created, or any other image you like.
- Include the image with the poem.
- There are no other requirements (form, meter, rhyme, etc.) for this prompt – your poem need only be inspired by the image you select.
Oh this is so beautiful and poignant Punam. Loved it my friend
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Thanks so much, Sadje. Your words always light up my day. 😍
I am still scratching my head over your prompt! 😅
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You’re most welcome. It’s a bit of a twister
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It is!
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😅
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Superb imagery Punam … 🌏😊
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Thanks so much, Ivor. 🤗💙
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You’re welcome Punam 😊😍😊
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This is gorgeously composed!!!!
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Dawn, thanks so much!
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Punam I love this nighttime poem! I went to the shore in Florida where the bioluminescence on the sand was amazing – every step taken was a flash of light and every footstep was immediately erased by the water… Love the impermanence expressed!!
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Val, how wonderful! I love beaches and I am delighted you enjoyed the poem. ❤️
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really so lovely with such a beautiful and touching flow, Punam…🤍
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Thanks a lot, Destiny! Delighted that you enjoyed it. ❤️
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pleasure always 🤍🌷
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wow.
and… wow…
Amazingly written, Punam. Vivid and visceral for me.
Much love,
David
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David, thanks so much! ❤️🙏🏼
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The ocean has many languages, and seems to hold our emotions in its ebb and flow. You evoke this so well Punam. (K)
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It does, Kerfe! Thanks a lot.
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Oh, this is such lovely writing, Punam. You capture the transience of life so delicately ❤️
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I love the last two lines. “Unquiet heart” is a very good description for it
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Such a vivid and stunning poem! Love it 😊
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