It kept me up the whole of long, dark night tantalizingly coming close then taking flight
but the moon, my forever partner in crime, stayed up earnestly, helping me rhyme!
then when the skies turned a pretty blush pink and the sleepy sun cajoled me with golden winks
I surrendered my poem to the dawn. It stretched languidly then fell into a rhythm, bidding me adieu, gliding fluidly!
it embraced gay metaphors dancing happily smiling at similes hanging from trees lazily
nodding at adjectives it met in the park sauntering by well-versed dogs that didn’t bark
refusing to pause for bird-like commas strewn on green grass running sentences into each other without a clause!
I realised aubade is just the time to serenade a verse when nouns and verbs in gentle breeze disperse
it assumes a life of its own refusing to fall in line for line humming a tune I can’t call fully mine.
Written for dVerse MTB. Today’s host, Laura, says:
So for this MTB: Critique and Craft prompt, there are two writing choices:
a poem evoking daybreak/greeting the dawn
a poem about lovers parting at dawn
Please include ‘Morning’ or ‘Aubade’ somewhere in the title of your chosen poem
Either poem can be written in any rhyme scheme but since ‘aubade’ also refers to a piece of music to the morning then focus on making the words sound melodious.
For those who prefer more of a challenge, write in hymnal, ballad or a song format of your choosing