
Turbid thoughts taint decisions
undermining clarity and cogent concepts
moot matters mar the mindscape
ululating notions create commotion
leaving the brain too befuddled to
tie all the unravelled loose ends.
Written for David’s W3 to yours truly’s prompt to write an acrostic poem on the following.
1. Discipline
2. Enthusiasm
3. Meditation
4. Tumult
5. Trouble
Doubt
Doing with fear
Oneness is near
Under the tear
Being called queer
To be so clear
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Self doubt is the worst.
Though doubt was not one of the proposed words, thanks for joining in. 😊
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🤣 👍
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👍🏼😀
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Perhaps to be “troubled” is to have self-doubt…
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another wow, Punam.
beautifully expressed and so relatable. 🙏🤍
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Destiny, you are very kind. Thanks so much. ❤️
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my pleasure always 🤍
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Spot on Punam. Excellent acrostic poem. 🫶🏼
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Thanks a lot, dear aapa. ❤️
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You’re most welcome my dear sister
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So true, hard to pull things together when you are in the midst of turmoil. Nice write.
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It is! Thanks a lot, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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We all get caught up in that feeling sometimes. (K)
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We sure do. Thanks, Kerfe.
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Punam this one is gripping! I could feel the swirl and definitely the tumult!!
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Val, thanks so much! I hope you are feeling better.
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Great job on the prompt with all of the words. Truly relatable! ❣️
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Thanks a lot, dear Cindy..❤️
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You’re so welcome Punam!!! 💞
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Excellent & visceral, Punam!
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Thanks, David. ❤️
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Punam ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the brilliant Suzette Benjamin is now live (it's up until Monday):
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thanks so much, David. Will check soon. ❤️
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It’s so easy to get caught up in it and so hard to shed it. Brilliant piece, Punam.
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You are right, Eugi! Thanks so much!
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Most welcome, Punam.
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Well-done, Punam. Those “undulating notions” do “create commotion.” 😊
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Don’t they! Thanks a lot, Merril. 😊
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You’re very welcome! 😊
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our inner turmoil expressed perfectly 🙌
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Thanks, Angela! 🙌🏼😊
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Oh, Punam, that is precisely how I feel sometimes! ❤ Love the acrostic poem!
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Cheryl, though I am sorry that you too feel like this at times, thanks so much for sharing this resonates. Always appreciate your support. ❤️❤️
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Excellent picture and poem, Punam.
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Kamal, thanks ever so much. 🙏🏼❤️
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You are most welcome Punam ❤️
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