
Hope is a bereaved tramp
trampled every day
but carrying on nonetheless
Hope is a soggy paper
lying listless, limp
waiting for the sun to make it fly
Hope is a frantic afterthought
that slowly arises from
the ashes of pugnacious practicality
Hope is a cumbersome yoke
that sits stoically
on fragile, lonely shoulders
Hope is a homeless vagabond
roaming wide-eyed around
in search of a homing heart
Hope is a zealous zephyr
never zinging
singing softly a soulful song
Hope is an iron locket
that hangs heavy
keeping the depressed neck upright
Hope is a square bubble
trying always to fit
into a round hole without bursting
Hope is a bird on hiatus
lost and tired
but striving to turn up one day.
Written for David’s W3 where POW, Kerfe, has asked us to begin our poem with “Hope is…” I have also used words from Kerfe’s random word generator.
Also written for Eugi’s moonwashed weekly prompt and Jim’s Thursday inspiration.
Sharing at dVerse OLN.
Wow!! So many beautiful elements in this poem, Ma’am. You nailed these prompts superbly. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Aishwarya! Truly appreciate your comment. 😊
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Thank you, Punam, for your inspiring poem, just what I need!
Joanna
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That’s such a heartwarming thing to say! Thanks so much, Joanna.
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You are more than welcome, Punam!
Joanna
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Hope is the fact that you are reading hope
is the thing that brought you here
Hope is, but I am.
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Indeed. You sure are.
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Indeed, and you are too!
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I think it would be nice to be a bird on hiatus. Nice poem, Punam.
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I think so too, Jim. Thanks a lot.
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expressed so beautifully.
absolutely lovely, Punam🤍
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Destiny, much appreciated. Thank you. ❤️
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I really love all those examples… not just the feathers I have heard of before.
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Thanks, Björn. I wanted it to be very different from feathers.
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so original, enjoyed every image, but that soggy paper waiting to dry and fly is just gorgeous! 💗👏👏
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Thanks so much, Tricia. 🥰
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HOPE is obviously a heavy subject…i appreciate your original metaphors.
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Thanks a lot, Lynn. I was thinking about hoping against hope kind of scenarios when I wrote this.
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Oh my that has some ummph.
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Thanks, Rog.
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Oh man…
I literally felt the frustration in me for Hope.
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Yes, hoping when no hope is left can be so frustrating.
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Such a beautiful poem Punam. Great use of all the prompts my dear friend
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Thanks so much, dear Sadje. ❤️
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You’re most welcome dear friend
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I especially like the homeless vagabond verse. You made good use of the words! (K)
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Those words really helped along! Thanks for the words and the wonderful prompt. And thank you.
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I find them very useful to jump-start my thoughts.
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Wonderful poem, Punam! Love it 😍
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Thanks a lot, Deeksha. 😊❤️
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Oh, the play up of words Punam..so flawless
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Mich, you are very kind. Thanks a lot. ❤️🌷
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Well done Punam! Managing all 3 prompts in a single poem is impressive!
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Thanks a lot, Val. They came together quite easily.
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Hope is beautiful Punam!! 🙂 I invite you to come read my OLN offering tonight on my site — and to experience my wife Kathy’s profound love affair with nature, which is currently hampered by her newly discovered cancer. She goes into the UW Fred Hutch Cancer Center April 22nd for a multi-hour regimen of robotics surgery on her neck and throat area. Post Op will put her in ICU for Four days. Please keep Kathy, my love, in your thoughts. Thank you… ✌🏼🕊🫶🏼❣️
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Rob, sending you and Kathy hugs and healing prayers. She will be in my thoughts and you too, my friend. Be strong, she will need to see your smiling face when she comes out of ICU.
Thanks so much for taking out time to read. Sending you lots of love.
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Very well written, Punam! Hope is what keeps us alive and moving forward.
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So it is. Thanks a lot, Dwight.
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You are welcome.
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Wow! My hopes fulfilled by reading your amazing poetry, Punam. Brava!
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Aah! Thanks so much, Eugi! Always appreciate your support and encouragement. 💖
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My pleasure, Punam.
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Punam ~ you blow me away!
Your every stanza is brilliant!
Sincerely,
David
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David, thank you!🥰
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An interesting perspective on hope. I never really think of it as associated with such heavy thoughts, so you have expanded my thinking.
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Thank you. When a person is down and out, then even being hopeful seems so difficult. I was thinking of that situation.
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This is beautiful, Punam. I love the metaphors.
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Thanks a lot, Sonia. Much appreciated.
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Wow, Punam! Hope is one of my favorite words. I love all of the exquisite metaphors that make up this stunning poem! ❤
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Cheryl, thanks a lot for your lovely words. Much appreciated. ❤️❤️
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brilliant use of imagery with hope Punan! Love it! ❣️
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Cindy, heartfelt thanks. 💖
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Punam – this is a brilliant poem truly, it is so true and deeply felt at the same time, each single stanza has its own impact!!
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I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your deeply felt words. Thanks from the bottom of my heart.
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You are very welcome 🙂
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Wow. This poem is amazing! The square bubble is so incredible 🫧 I love this poem so much 🌹
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hi, Punam ❤
Just wanna let you know that the lovely Aishwarya of 'Kitty's Verses' is our W3 host this week ~
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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