
You arrived uninvited, rising from rot
peacefully poised in the prettiest pot
a serene squatter staking a claim
on homely basil, tomatoes and curry leaves’ terrain
rising defiantly, daring me to uproot and hoe
The wind, the rain and the sun wholeheartedly embrace
and are not unfair. I am no arbitrator of anyone’s fate
my four by eight balcony certainly has space
for anyone to grow n propagate
I salute your sassy salient strength.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Sarah, invites us to write about weeds.
I love the alliterative title, Punam, and your photo that illustrates your poem and introduces me to an unfamiliar plant. The rhyme scheme stood out for me, as well as the phrases ‘peacefully poised in the prettiest pot’ and ‘serene squatter’.
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Kim, it is an unfamiliar plant for me too. When it started growing, I researched (googled) its antecedents. 😉
Thanks a lot for your appreciation. I am glad you enjoyed the rhyme scheme.
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I never heard about perilla, but it seems to be related to mint, and that is one I know that can grow as a weed, and seeing that even in pots there are those invaders growing.
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Yes, it is related to mint, tastes like it too. It just popped up one day in the pot and I didn’t have the heart to root it out.
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loved the idea of describing you wild guest as sassy.
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Thanks, Rog. 😀
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Erogratis Tenella
Weed do what
But invite curiosity
About your contribution
To eco systems and life itself.
A sneeze to give brief pleasure?
An aroma that encourages a trek through unknown fields?
A dare to touch thorny stems and soft petals?
Yes, that is what weeds do.
Invaluable things.
I can feel my own weediness inside
As I explore this world.
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Love it!
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Lots of lovely alliteration here! And a great attitude from you – and that weed!
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Thanks so much, Sarah! It was a lovely prompt.
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Fabulous Punam – looks like there is room in the pot 😊
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There sure is, Angela! 😊
Thank you. ❤️
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salute your sassy salient strength – absolutely loved this description for the insistent one, manages to make space uninvited :)) I loved the sprinkle of alliterations in your poem.
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Thanks so much, Pragalbha. I so appreciate your lovely words.
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good one sis, that’s how I talk to the freeloaders who invade my lovely lil cottage … grubby ants and cockies! I don’t like sharing but what to do, I evict them if I can catch them 🙂
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I don’t mind these freeloaders but ants and cockroaches…sorry, no entry! 🙂
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lol we’ve all had a major invasion recently, they are great alerts for storm coming … it did and they’ve gone again. Can’t blame them for a need to survive 🙂
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I wonder if we alert them to anything? 🤔🐜
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doubtful, most of us are oblivious 🙂
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Have read “The Overstory”?
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no, but may I suggest you research Findhorn … a Scottish community 🙂
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Ok!
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Such beautiful greens! sometimes a surprise guest is a welcome one. (K)
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It is a lovely plant and a surprise guest is always welcome.
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Aww, what a lovely tribute to this plant.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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My fav part – I am no arbitrator of anyone’s fate
and
you may have a four by eight balcony (which also has space) but your heart has endless space 🙂
Love you loads!
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Love you too, beta. ❤️
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Lovely poem celebrating the unexpected!
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Thanks so much, Val.
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How delightful, Punam! Nice photo, I enjoyed the alliteration! ❤
For me, the line between weeds and wildflowers blurs considerably. When I lived in DC, I planted herbs on the balcony. The birds loved them. They left nothing for us! 🙂
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Thanks so much, Cheryl. Much appreciated. ❤️
Birds do not leave herbs alone. My coriander and mint are all gobbled by them. 😅
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A wonderful poem. We will soon move out of our house and have a small balcony where we will live.
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Thanks so much, Jim! I hope you will have some plants in the balcony.
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Good gardeners have supple and duple relations with their green neighbors!
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Absolutely, Brendan!
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Your poem made me fall in love with this plant! Wonderful, Punam 💕🙂
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How lovely! Thanks so much, Harmony. 😊❤️
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I salute your sassy salient strength.
Love this line Punam. I too have a newfound respect for willful weeds ☺️💕
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Same here! Thanks a lot, Christine! 😊❤️
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We have several sassies on our balcony and love their strength to reach for the sun and grow.
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Yes, I am very much impressed by their tenacity! 😊
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Such lovely greens and such a wonderful poem, Punam. Awesome.
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Thanks so much, Kamal.
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You are always welcome dear Punam ❤️
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i love how you speak about the weeds in your little garden poetically.
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Thanks so much, Mich. ❤️
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Pretty perilla indeed and a prettier host lady to boot. Love this sweet, little gesture of yours dear Punam. ❤ Hugs.
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Thanks so much, Natasha dear, for your lovely words. Hugs back at you. ❤️
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A weed adopted. Nice one!!!
Much💜love
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Thanks a lot, Gillena. 💙
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Love your beauty in the rough defying all odds with your well written poem Punam! ❣️
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Thanks so much, Cindy. 💖
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You’re so welcome Punam! ❣️
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Beautiful poem and greenery!
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Thanks so much!
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Punam, you have a large heart. After reading this well written piece, I would never want to uproot a weed.
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Usha, you are very kind. I let them be and my potted plants are none the worse for it. Thanks so much.
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