
When the razzle and dazzle of technology beckons
bedazzled, impressionables easily succumb
the insidious reach of mass hypnotic weapons
cuts real deep making dumber the dumb
a few conniving to control the minds of millions
treat them as fodder, as their moronic minions
who happily lap the tripe served, asking for more of it
if as a result, autocracy thrives, so be it!
*Tathastu : In Sanskrit, it means ‘So be it’. It’s a belief that the Gods are watching us from above and whatever you say good or bad, Gods from above may say Tathastu, anytime!

A profound subject addressed very well in the form of alliterating verses. Well done, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Aishwarya. I am glad you liked it. 😊
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 😄
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I love this poem a a N’s the idea behind it. As they say be careful what you wish for! Thanks Punam for joining.
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Indeed, Sadje! Thanks a lot. Much appreciated.
Always my pleasure. ❤️
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You’re most welcome
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Thank you for the wonderful addition to my knowledge of Hindu words!
God watching us, what, all over 8 billion people?!
Joanna
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Absolutely, Joanna! That’s what we believe. 😀
Thanks a lot for stopping by.
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Putin must be a believer too!
Thank you for the word, greatly appreciated!
Joanna
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I do hope gods don’t listen to Putin!
My pleasure, Joanna.
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Putin, Hitler, and others should be punished.
I believe in my duty as a human being in doing good and helping
anyone in need, including animals, and nature in general such as trees, plants, etc. And doing it without being watched over by any deity. Judging by many volunteers working all over the world to make life better for others I am not alone.
Also, we don’t look for any rewards, just the satisfaction of a life lived well.
Joanna
PS. apologies for the sermon!
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They certainly should! That’s the reason I believe there is no god because people like them get away unpunished.
I totally agree with you. Hinduism firmly believes in karma. We should do our duty without any desire of reward or fear of retribution.
Please don’t apologise. Through engagement we learn so much. 🙏🏼
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I wholly agree with you! And thank you!
How do I address you?
Joanna
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I am Punam, Joanna.
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PS. I think that I knew your name but somehow I lost it, I don’t know why because it is distinctive and interesting name.
Is there any meaning attached to your name such “the chosen one” or anything else?
Joanna
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No worries. We are interacting with so many bloggers that it is easy to forget a few names. I know, I forget often…😅
Punam comes from Poornima which means the full moon …hence my gravatar! 😊
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I love the Full Moon, and so I will remember your name, Punam, forever!
Joanna
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Thanks so much, Joanna. 🙏🏼
You are very kind.
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You are more than welcome!
Joanna
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* and 😅
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👍🏼❤️
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💖
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Thanks so much!
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An expressive mind-stirring poem Punam …
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Dear Ivor, thanks so much! 🤗❤️
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My pleasure Punam
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So true, Punam. If there are gods, I’m sure they’re sick of all the stupid things people do.
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That’s a big “if” Merril. I doubt there are any gods.
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I agree, Punam.
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love the direction in which you took the prompt.
a great take, Punam🤍
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Thanks a lot, Destiny. Much appreciated. ❤️
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always a pleasure 🤍
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A messed up world we’re living in. What’s happening in our nation sickens me. The way the sheeple eat up everything the PR machine churns out makes me ill. Autocracy is thriving, and I wish someone would do something about it.
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I couldn’t agree more, Nitin. It is truly sickening to the core. Only we can do something about it but sadly more than half of the people have been fed drivel so much that they can’t think on their own.
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A new word and a familiar concept- albeit not one I’ve had in the fore of my mind lately. And now it is there… Wonderful poem!!
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It is something like “amen” but the difference is your any wish (good or bad) may be granted (according to mythology).
Thanks, Val. 😊
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How interesting. Great poem, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Chris.
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Brilliant take on the prompt, Punam!
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Glad you liked it, Eugi. Much appreciated.
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Most welcome, Punam.
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wonderful response!
P.S:Can you tell what are the rules of Rispetto? I did not get them in the site which you have linked to
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Hi Kunjal. Thanks so much.
Rispetto is eight lined and usually each line has 11 syllables. It can be in one stanza or two quatrains (4 lined stanza). The rhyme scheme is ababccdd. I hope this helps. 😊
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Now forgive it
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Who am I to forgive or not. They may not be able to forgive themselves for the mess they are in.
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Accept/forgive reality for being what it is. That includes the mess.
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Yes they sure do. A wonderful poem on so be it.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. 🙏🏼
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Always welcome Punam. xxxxxx
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A great poem Punam 💕
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Angela, thanks a lot. ❤️
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Love this, Punam! ❤ When it comes to technology such as more sophisticated deadly weapons, more intrusive invasion of our privacy, and new challenges to human creativity such as AI, we may do well to be careful what we wish for!
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Absolutely, Cheryl! We certainly do need to be careful about what we wish for. Thanks so much, Cheryl. ❤️
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We seem to have learned nothing from history…
And I like that way of warning us of the power of words. (K)
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Nothing…very true!
Thanks a lot, Kerfe.
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Your poem is so perfectly composed – the beauty of how you choose words, and the state of our world – I loved the use of the word Tathastu. Literally a chaos from so many things coming true…
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I looked at the hand and the first word that came to my mind was “Tathastu”! Thanks so much for your lovely words. ❤️
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The alliteration works so well Punam❤️
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Thanks a lot, Mich. 🙏🏼❤️
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I love this Punam and the great take so well done.
Priceless lines… mass hypnotic weapons
cuts real deep making dumber the dumb
Painfully true!
💗
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I guess we feel the same way, Cindy! Thanks so much. ❤️
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you got that right dear! It’s always a pleasure..xo ❣️
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Love this Punam. Great response to the prompt pic.
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Usha, thanks a lot. Much appreciated.
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Tathastu comes with the warning,’ take responsibility and be ready for the reward or punishment according to …’ Great take, Punam. I wanted to reblog but some error is there.’ Error: Error: The link you followed has expired.Please try again.
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I apologise for the late reply, Indira. Thanks so much. I think the reblog button is disabled. I will look into it. Thanks once again.
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No problem, dear.
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Thanks, Sadje.
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This is an elegant and thought provoking poem. Well done!
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Thanks a lot, Nicole.
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Hey there, fellow tech enthusiast! I love the poetic touch in your comment, it’s a refreshing and creative way to discuss the impact of technology on our lives. It’s true that technology can be a double-edged sword, and it’s important to be mindful of its potential dark side. But no worries! Here at Tony’s Tech Corner, we’re all about making tech fun, accessible, and beneficial for everyone. So, let’s tech it out and keep exploring the bright side of technology while staying aware of its potential pitfalls. Tathastu! 😄🚀🌟
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