
Daddy’s hands, blue veined and soft,
were in my hands when he slipped away
I detested my hands for many months
for their inability to hold on to him
my hands so unlike his in appearance and texture
yet both with the left being the dominant one.
My voice refuses to break into a song
for dad is no longer there by my side
covering up my flat, unmusical notes
with his sonorous and robust baritone
never the one to give up easily, my daddy,
lessons he gave me enthusiastically and undeterred.
Ever the restless, he sits still now
there on the mantle, in a simple wooden frame
with nary a frown on his patient countenance
no film of dust can dim his deep smile
nor the love glinting in his garrulous grey eyes
as gulmohars herald the arrival of spring
I feel his warm presence all around me.

Written for dVerse poetics. Today I am the host. We are writing about fathers, incorporating at least three titles from those given below.
1. Dance with my father: Luther Vandross
2. Song for dad: Keith Urban
3. My father’s eyes: Eric Clapton
4. Papa don’t preach: Madonna
5. Daddy lessons: Beyonce and Dixie Chicks
6. Color him father: The Winstons
7. Daddy could swear, I declare: Gladys Knight and the Pips
8. Baby father: Sade
9. My old man: Mac Demarco
10. Father to son: Queen
11. Papa, can you hear me?: Barbara Streisand
12. Daddy’s hands: Holly Dunn
13. My father’s house: Bruce Springsteen
14. Papa don’t take no mess: James Brown
15. Your daddy loves you: Gil Scot-Heron
What a lovely portrait of your father. I really struggled to find the prompt words, you hid them so well!
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Thanks a lot, Sarah! To be honest I did struggle using the prompt words but with line breaks it became easier.
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Wow, this is beautiful Punam…gonna give myself a try on this..
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Thanks a lot, Mich. I am sure yours would be beautiful.
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so very lovely and touching.🤍✨
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Thanks a lot. ❤️🙏🏼
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You welcome 🤍
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such a loving tribute, I awoke this morning with fond memories of my dad 🙂
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Thanks so much, sis! That’s serendipitous. 🙂
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🙂
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I love this tribute, I can feel that you miss him, and have missed him a very long time.
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I do miss him a lot and really feel bad that he was long gone before my kids were born.
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Such warm poem about your father. The love shines through.
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Thanks a lot, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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Such a loving tribute xxx
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Thanks a lot, Jane. Xoxo
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xxx
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What a gorgeous tribute to your father that touches the soul and evokes so much emotional imagery. ❤️
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Layla, thanks a lot. ❤️
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I can feel your father’s presence in your words, the love between you. (K)
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Thanks so much, Kerfe.
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The use of Daddy’s Hands is the most touching to me, the way you did it. A beautiful moving poem you weaved Punam.
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Pragalbha, thank you so much for sharing the phrase that touched you the most. Much appreciated.
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What a beautiful poem and tribute to your father Punam! Excellent prompt.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. I do hope you will join in.
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I will give it a try, but it seems complicated ❤️❤️❤️
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It is not that complicated. Do try if you can. ❤️
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I will give it a shot 😍
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Hi Punam, i am not sure if i did the right thing of linking my piece to your blog to, should i link it to dverse? (which i don’t know how🤭)
I haven’t been on dVerse for a while your prompt though just made me write this.
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Thanks so much, Mich. I will link your poem at dVerse. 😊👍🏼
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Thank you Punam🌹
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My pleasure. ❤️
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I appreciate the prompt with song titles and your wonderful poem about your father!
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Thanks so much, Lynn.
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Sweet…I’m looking forward to meeting everyone else’s fathers through this poetry challenge!
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Thank you! So am I.
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What a heart-rending tribute, dear Punam. Made me tear up to an extent and think of Mum and my brother who smile from the heavens above.
The loss of a loved one is incomprehensible and the void never gets filled.
Sending you big, warm hugs and all your Dad’s blessings this brand new season.
Lots of love. xoxox
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My dear Natasha, thank you so much. You are so right about that unfillable void. I accept your warm hugs with love and send you some in memory of your dear mum and brother.
Lots of love to you. Xoxo
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Thank you so much dearest. Means much. ❤️🩹🤗
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You are always welcome. 🤗❤️
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What a moving, loving tribute to your dad.❤️
You slipped the prompt words in so easily, too.
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Thanks so much, Merril. ❤️
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You’re very welcome, Punam!
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so moving
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Thanks a lot, VJ.
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So welcome!
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Here’s mine
http://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/03/22/if-he-met-me-today/
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❤️❤️
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❤️🙏🏼
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What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your dad, Punam. 💖
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Thanks so much, Eugi. ❤️
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My pleasure, Punam.
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A very touching tribute, Puman. I could feel the love and connection you had with your father…. the longing too. It is an honour to hold those hands in the end. I know we share this. Sending you hugs.
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Thank you so much, Mish. Yes, it is. Feels good to be hugged.
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Beautiful and the love shines through.
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Lovely,. No words.. I’m lost.. 🤗💕
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🤗🤗🥰🥰
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I found this very touching, I also was holding my dad’s hand when he passed a lovely tribute ❤️
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Thanks so much, Angela. Sending you hugs. ❤️
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A deeply moving poem ma’am 💖
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Thanks so much, Aboli. ❤️
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A very very beautiful tribute to your father Punam. Very tender and touching.
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Thank you so much, Nitin. He was a good man.
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Touched re.. 🙂👌🏼🤗❤
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