
When I read your words and there is a surge of awe
and that overwhelming feeling of dismay at my own ineptness
threatens to push me off the precipice
then your gentle persuasive encouragement
pulls me back from the ledge
pushing me to try to better myself
When your keen eye unerringly zeroes in
on the nuance couched in my ordinary words
I try to convey my delight through emojis at hand
your warmth crocheted in caring comments
wraps my heart in a virtual embrace
When you open for me a window into your world
giving me a glimpse into the unseen and unknown
I travel the world from the cushy comfort of my home
savouring sounds and sights; sensory delights
heart all a tingle with a satisfied smile
When your verses full of vivacity and verve
jauntily hold my hand and pull into your world
you infuse my thoughts and lighten my heart with your quirky smile
that I espy twinkling in each line and stanza
I then feel light as a bird and soar with your words
and never have I felt that you are miles away.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today I am the host and we are paying tribute to blogger friends. Come join us.
I have borrowed a line from Kate’s post.
A shoutout to all blogger friends who have stood by me through my erratic schedule. I may not return to regular blogging till sometime in April.
I love that your poem is a celebration of kindred spirits, Punam, whiwch applies not only to personal friends but also to our circle of poet friends. You have captured in the first stanza that lack of confidence that so many of us have felt and the positivity that comes from another person’s ‘caring comments’.
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Thanks, Kim. For ages Kate had been urging me to participate in dVerse prompts but I could never muster courage. But, as you put it, the positivity really helped.
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There is so much to love about the friends we meet online for the love of poetry… a few of them I have met IRL… and it is often amazing. Great that you reminded me of of Kate, it was a long time since I passed by her blog.
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I agree, the love of poetry is a great bedrock of online friendship. Kate, has not been writing too frequently these days.
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A really lovely poem that is reflective of the friendship and in so being, ends up offering back to this special person, the same-same you have been gifted throughout the years. How wonderful. And thanks for hosting the prompt.
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Thanks so much! I just wanted my blogger friends to know how much they mean to me.
My pleasure.
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“your warmth crocheted in caring comments
wraps my heart in a virtual embrace”
Your words just about speak for me ~~~ In thanks for the embraces you have sent me over the last year, Punam!
Sending you a rainbow-skein of love, an infinity-sign of lives connected and shared xxx
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Kathy, beautifully said! Thanks so much for the gorgeous rainbow-skein of love. May we keep embracing each other with words and remain connected.
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dVerse online friends — a delightful group of friends who are always supportive!
These lines I especially like:
“your warmth crocheted in caring comments
wraps my heart in a virtual embrace”
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Thanks, Lillian! dVerse is a special community and so is WordPress.
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Punam, this encapsulates the very essence of the online poetry community!! I love it to pieces!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Val, sending lots of love your way for always being so supportive. ❤️❤️❤️
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Love your friendship with Kate. We are indeed blessed to have our blogger friends to “travel the world” and see the world with new eyes. Thanks for hosting.
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Thanks a lot, Grace. Kate is special and so are so many other bloggers. I am grateful for your presence in my life.
My pleasure always.
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What a beautiful tribute Punam. The feelings are mutual my dear friend.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. I couldn’t let go of this opportunity to celebrate my online friends. ❤️
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You did it with so much aplomb and sincerity.
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❤️❤️
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😍
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Sadje said what I was just going to say Punam. The feelings are mutual. (K)
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Kerfe, I am so blessed to have met you here.
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We are lucky!
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Such a lovely tribute to online friendship. You’ve captured the essence beautifully.
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Sonia, thanks so much! Had it not been for blogging our paths would never have crossed.
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Hey Punam can I use a line from this lovely poem of yours?
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Sure, dear Sadje!
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Thanks a lot my dear.
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❤️❤️
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🥹🥹🥹
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your warmth crocheted in caring comments
wraps my heart in a virtual embrace
I really enjoyed your poem and the lines above in particular. What an interesting prompt you gave us today! Well done, Punam.
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Dwight, thank you so much! I am delighted you enjoyed the prompt. Look forward to reading your poem.
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You are very welcome!
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absolutely stunning if I don’t say so myself …. it resonates deeply! And I never feel like you are miles away 🙂
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Hey, sis! Thanks for letting me borrow your beautiful line! Yes, with hearts so close, miles don’t count. Thank you. ❤️
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and Jay, also from India, wrote something similar with another line of mine … nice to have such very dear friends 🙂
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Because you are such a good friend to everyone. 🙂
I read his lovely tribute.
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too sweet 🙂
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“pulls me back from the ledge
pushing me to try to better myself”
Luv the caring and guidance in this friendship.
Much💜love
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Thanks a lot, Gillena. 💙
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Your poem made my heart sing, Punam. What a beautiful tribute to our online friends. 💖
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Eugi, that made my day! Thank you, my friend, for always being there. ❤️❤️
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My pleasure, Punam! Your poem made my day.💖
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A heartwarming and insightful poem, Punam. Delightful! ❤ WordPress has been a wonderful, supportive, and inspiring experience for me. Thank you for this lovely tribute! ❤
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Dear Cheryl, thank you so much for always being there. ❤️❤️
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Your words truly capture the beauty and power of connection that can be found through writing and sharing our thoughts with others. It’s wonderful to see how your blogger friends have had such a positive impact on your life. The way you’ve described feeling a surge of awe and delight from your friends’ writing is truly beautiful.
It’s heartwarming to see how the encouragement and care shown by your blogger friends can lift you up and inspire you to be better. Your description of traveling the world and experiencing new things through your friends’ words is a testament to the power of writing and the connections, even though it is virtual, that can be formed through it.
It’s truly amazing how, even though we may be physically far apart, we can find common ground and mean through our writing. Your ability to convey your emotions and experiences so vividly is a gift, and it’s clear that your writing has touched and impacted many, including your blogger friends you are responding to.
Overall, the poem serves as a touching reminder of the importance of supportive and inspiring friendships, even if they exist solely in the virtual world of blogging.
👍👏👌😊
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I am touched beyond words by your kindness. WordPress has been a wonderful platform and has given me some priceless friendships. This was my way of saying thank you to the community.
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Punam, this is such a great poem and challenge! I love this idea of sharing a line from a friend’s poem! 🧡
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Colleen, so glad you liked the idea. Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome. I’m sorry I didn’t get chance to write for this one.
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No worries. Time is in short supply for most of us.
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It is. I’ll catch another of your prompts.
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👍🏼 look forward to it.
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Here’s my poem;
http://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/03/02/for-friends-who-became-family/
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Thank you. I am honoured. ❤️
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It’s my pleasure
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So beautifully done! Amazing🌻
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Thanks a lot, Jay.
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What a gorgeously written poem ♥️ Your poems are always so descriptive and fascinating. Love it 😊
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Thanks so much, my dear. ❤️
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Wow this is a great poem Paean. Well written and I can’t wait to read your regular blog posts in April🔥🔥🔥💯
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Thanks a lot, Mthobisi. 🙏🏼
I am writing every now and then even now. But hope to be regular from April.
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This is so beautiful and heartfelt dear Punam.
I love the last stanza❣️
“When your verses full of vivacity and verve
jauntily hold my hand and pull into your world
you infuse my thoughts and lighten my heart with your quirky smile
that I espy twinkling in each line and stanza
I then feel light as a bird and soar with your words
and never have I felt that you are miles away.”
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Thanks so much, Cindy. Feel blessed to have wonderful friends here. ❤️❤️
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🥰💕💕💕…
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🥰🤗❤️
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