A confrontation
is a bottomless abyss
unwelcome ripples
anguish reverbrates
waves of anger wash over
close eyes to forget
tracing name on heart
rapier sharp memories
draw not blood but soul
Written for Sadje’s wdys.
Echoes of pain
A confrontation
is a bottomless abyss
unwelcome ripples
anguish reverbrates
waves of anger wash over
close eyes to forget
tracing name on heart
rapier sharp memories
draw not blood but soul
Written for Sadje’s wdys.
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Confrontation, may be, painful or hurtful, but it beats, taking everything in, and NOT saying a word, that’ll cause, a whole lot of damages comparing to confronting someone for something wrong that s/he had done.
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What a profound take Punam. Absolutely true. Thanks for joining in.
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Reblogged this on Keep it alive and commented:
Here’s Punam’s take on WDYS # 165, she talks about some profound truths of life.
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There is such a smorgasbord of pain that we as humans, are subjected to. If we can make it out the other end with only bits of our soul stolen, we have accomplished much. 💜💜💜
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A great take, and touching too… Felt your words 🤍
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So much said in a few words, Punam. Those things do reverberate and leave traces.
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WOW!!
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I love your word usage so much. It has nice comforting (idk why) but also stressful atmosphere to it.
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Punam, You have captured the pain of confrontation. Confrontation is the last resort after the peaceful exchange of opinions and perspective have failed. Still, it is better than a build-up of resentment.
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Punam this is haunting.
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Confrontation is truly unwelcomed but needed at times. The outcome in some cases clears up misunderstandings. Nicely done!
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Some hurts cut deep. Sharp-edged writing, Punam.
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You have said so much in this poem ❤
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love it especially the last line!
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Brilliant take on the prompt, Punam!
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Excellent and deep poem, Punam.
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a very profound insight sis … wishing you and yours seasonal greeting and all the best for 2023! May good health and continuing creativity ooze from every pore 🙂
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Excellent, Punam.
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Such power and beauty in your words. Elegantly beautiful, Punam. ❤️
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Draw not blood but soul… Beautiful!
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Wow.. How much truth here..!! So so well done dear.. 🤗💕
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