
The sea serenades sweetly from dusk to dawn
changing colours following the footsteps
of a radiant sun and luminous moon. I am drawn
to the portal promising a life of adventure
the ebb and the flow, the waves calling
calling to be conquered, to be won
a quest that ignites a fire in my chest
I taste its sweet brackishness in my dreams
and yet…
my heart sings soulfully a homely tune
mooring my wandering, restless thoughts
my arms ache for warm embraces,
my eyes tear up for beloved faces
my steps turn homeward of their own volition
the truth of my existence lightens my being
some questions have no answers
and some answers are not worth seeking.
Written for dVerse MTB. Today’s host, Grace, has asked us to try our hand at Zen poetry.
Also responding to Sadje’s wdys.
Great combination of both the prompts Punam. Such a poignant poem, pulling at heartstrings. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Yes, a happy coincidence that both the prompts gelled together.
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You’re most welcome
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Touches the heart… Emotionally charged and beautifully expressed Punam… 🤍
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Thank you so much, Destiny. ❤️
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Lust for the adventure and love for the homely embraces. Beautiful and Zen.
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Thanks so much, Jay.
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I agree with the previous comments. This is a lovely meander, like the moon moving across the sky. And a great final couplet. I wonder if it wouldn’t be worth reducing the rest of the poem into a very short, wistful ponder, with those lines as the enigmatic answer, to give them even more impact.
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Thanks a lot, Jane. I admit I do meander when I write. I will definitely try to follow your advice and share it with you for feedback. 🙂
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Meandering can lead to interesting places. It’s just not the remit for some forms 🙂
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You are right. I am still learning. 🙂
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We all are 🙂
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🙂
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This is beyond beautiful, Punam! I especially love those closing lines. They hit home 💘💘
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Sanaa, you are very kind. Thanks so much. 💖💖
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Deep and profound poem, Punam. Touched my heart.
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Aww, Kamal! Thanks so much. 🙏🏼❤️
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Welcome dear Punam 💖😊
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😊🤗
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💖💖
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Ah, the siren’s call of the sea! Beautifully written, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Dora. ❤️
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All the adjectives are inadequate. I love this one Punam!
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Val, you are too kind! Thanks so much. ❤️
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Wonderful piece Punam. Have a great holiday and see you next year my friend.
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Thanks so much, Rob. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Stay healthy, my friend. See you soon. ❤️
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Those last two lines in particular resonate with me ❤
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AJ, thanks so much! ❤️
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The Zen transition in your poetry stanzas works quite well … well done! Wishing you a Joyous Holiday!
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Helen, thanks a lot! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you. ❤️
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I admire the contrast of the sense of adventure of the first stanza, with the homeward thoughts of the second stanza. Beautifully weaved, with the 2 ending lines giving food for thought. Wishing you a good break and Happy New Year!!!!
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Grace, thank you so much! Happy holidays to you too! See you in 2023. ❤️
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A wonderment of thoughts that leaves the reader with questions to ponder.
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Truedessa, thank you so much. ❤️
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Beautiful write, Punam. The last three lines are exquisite. ❤️
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That’s so sweet of you to say! Thanks a lot, Jeff. ❤️
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I love the contrast between the sea and the sense of being home. The contrast between wandering and staying.
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Glad you liked it.
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Enjoyed where this took me, lots of wisdom in the last two lines! 👏👏
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Thanks, Tricia! 💖
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Welcome! 🌸💐🌸
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In youth we are oft filled with questions, as we age we are more stated with what we have had 🙂
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I really like what you have done here, Punam. Such great words of wisdom.
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Beautiful😊
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❤
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