Grubby
curious
child
nosey
touches
to eat
moves
gaily to
music
never
pompous
quiet
smart
bookish
naive
happy
go lucky
my boy
makes
his mama
proud
We are writing atoms on children/childhood for David’s W3 where David is POW.
Also for Eugi’s moonwashed musings weekly prompt.
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A beautiful poem for a awesome son
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. 🙏🏼
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🥰🥰🥰
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❤️🤗🥰
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❤️❤️❤️
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Do you read your poems to him? This is beautiful, as Sadje said.
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Tanmay, I have written a few poems for him and I do read out to them. But teenage is such an awkward age, he squirms when I read to him. 😅
Thanks so much. 😊
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Ah, I thought he was younger from this poem. I imagine that it might be difficult to get him to stay still for very long, like most other teenagers.
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I have written about when he was much younger. 😊
Oh, these days devices (thanks to covid) have done the impossible! Nowadays most teenagers have to be pushed to go out.
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Aaaw, a mother’s love ❣️so sweet…
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Thanks a lot, Destiny. ❤️
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Welcomes 🤗
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🤗
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this was a very sweet poem for your child!
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Thanks a lot.
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Lovely tribute to your son!
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Thank you so much, Cheryl.
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What a beautiful and touching poem, Punam! A loving tribute to a beautiful child. 💖
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Eugi, thank you so much! 💖🙏🏼
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My pleasure, Punam.
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The innocence of childhood, don’t normally last, so, as adults, we must, do everything we can, to, preserve it, for our own younger generations, especially when, our childhoods were all, stolen away from us long, long, ago.
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I agree. Thanks for reading.
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So very sweet! ☺️💝💝
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Thanks, Pamelap! 😊💖💖
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You are so welcome 🙏 💝I always look forward to your posts and poems!
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I really enjoyed the form.of this poem, Punam. Makes it very unique. Is it a specific form?
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Yes, Sonia. It is a series of “atom(s)” . Each atom has three lines….the first line has 5 letters, the second line has 7 letters and the third line 5 letters. Quite like haiku but instead of syllables, letters are counted.
Thanks so much.
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Oh I love every bit of this characterization! Your son sounds precious and a wonder to his dotting Mummy. May you both be blessed 🙏🥰
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Dora, thanks so much. 🙏🏼❤️😊
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Perfect portrait of a little boy!
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Thanks a lot, Val.
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oh he seems adorable. i love the image you used, it’s perfect.
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Thanks, Audrine. Yes, I was lucky to find this image.
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So very sweet, Punam! Proud mom indeed!
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Thanks a lot, Merril. 😊
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You’re welcome, Punam!
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A sweet tribute.
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Thanks a lot, D. A!
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Very sweet poem!
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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Aww, that’s lovely. ❤️🤗
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Thank you! 😊🤗❤️
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Punam, just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the awesome D. Avery, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Thanks, David. ❤️
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Brings me back to the days when I observed the same things about my son. Lovely, Punam!
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Awww.. So sweet.. Love to you both.. 🤗💕💕💕💕..
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