And the light was there…

(From Shuttlecock)

A closer dark encircles me
I find it harder to shake it off
the achromatic pewter dusk-dawn-sky
deepens to a coal blackness

regrets-strewn night descends icily
I singe my fingers as I reach out to the moon
all I wanted was a sip of cold winter
to damp down despair with numbing coldness

as the night begins to wear down
touched by the gentle golden fingers of the sun
the hedgerows birds suddenly begin to sing
I sit shivering and stuporous, with my sullen loneliness

Light alights on my sagging shoulders
lightening the burden of fears I carry
making light of the quilt of pain around me
and I shed my weariness.

Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Sarah, has asked us to write about light.

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39 thoughts on “And the light was there…

  1. So, so lovely, Punam! The repetition of “light” in the last stanza, in its varying connotations, works beautifully, after the heaviness of the earlier. Well done.

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  2. You have masterfully brought light to the ‘coal blackness’, Punam, and I love the imagery in the lines:
    ‘I singe my fingers as I reach out to the moon
    all I wanted was a sip of cold winter’
    and
    the wakening of nature by the ‘gentle golden fingers of the sun’.

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  3. Beautiful! I especially adore; “touched by the gentle golden fingers of the sun/the hedgerows birds suddenly begin to sing.” ❤❤❤

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  4. Beautiful Punam. I love how you seamlessly wove nature into the ups and downs of human emotions. The last stanza came through as a perfect antidote to the atmosphere set in the beginning.

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  5. Light alights on my sagging shoulders
    lightening the burden of fears I carry
    making light of the quilt of pain around me
    and I shed my weariness.

    How easily you do these prompts Punam.. I love to stay amazed.. 🤗🤗

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