
I tell a winter’s tale of a much awaited
long December and a longer January
I dream of the biting, moaning wind
ice cold and stiff feet-hands, blush pink nose.
When lazy, silvery ponderous puffs pervade
and heavy, grey, lumbering smoke collides with them
a hazy shade of winter are days
but I’ve got my love to keep me warm!
Since exquisite, feathery flakes do elude me
I leave no soggy, muddy footprints in the snow
I cannot sing of cold weather blues
‘my love is winter’ is my anthem!
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Lillian, has shared a list of winter songs and asked us to use atleast two in our verse. The songs are listed below. I have used those in italics.
A Hazy Shade of Winter (Simon and Garfunkel)
A Long December (Counting Crows)
A Winter’s Tale (Queen — and also The Moody Blues)
Cold Weather Blues (Muddy Waters)
Footprints in the Snow (Bill Monroe)
If We Make It Through December (Merle Haggard)
I’ve Got My Love to Keep Me Warm (Billie Holiday)
Let It Go (Idina Menzel)
Love Like Winter (AFI)
My Love Is Winter (The Smashing Pumpkins Oceania)
Roses from Snow (Emmylou Harris)
The Hounds of Winter (Sting)
Trapped Under Ice (Metallica)
When It’s Cold, I’d Like to Die (Moby)
Winter Things (Ariana Grande)
White Winter Hymnal (Fleet Foxes)
Also written for Eugi’s moonwashed musings weekly prompt.
I have also used words from Jane’s random word generator.
Awesome take on both prompts
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome my friend
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This is so vivid, I could almost feel a chill. I like how you used the theme. It was cozy and nice. Wonderfully done, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Tanmay. Much appreciated. 😊
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Such a lovely read… 🤍
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Thanks a lot. 💙
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I’m not dreaming of stanza one right now, I’m living it! lol Wonderful images, especially the lazy, silvery ponderous puffs.
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Lol Heather! I know how cold it is there. It is still warmish here. Thank you so much. 😊
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You’re welcome 😊
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Reads like an ode to winter, beautifully rendered. There hasn’t been much snow here yet. It looks beautiful when its freshly fallen.
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Thanks so much! Since it doesn’t snow here, I would love to see it once. 🙂
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Nice one Punam.
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much💜love
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Thanks, Gillena and my pleasure. 💙
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Winter is not my love at all. Even your luscious images didn’t convince me. Nice try though 🙂
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I totally get it, Jane. Even though I stay in the north, the temperatures rarely go below 4 degree celsius. It does snow in the hills though. I guess we all yearn for what we don’t have. 🙂
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The average December temperature here (daytime) is about 14°C and 3°C at night. But it’s a lot colder than that at present and will be for the next five days or so. I can do without snow too!
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Here the daytime weather at present is in twenties, and right in the middle of the city it feels warmer. It is only at the fag end of December and early January that the temperatures dip, there is heavy fog and no sunlight but that spell is intermittent.
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That would be lovely! Though heavy fog I can do without.
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Same here. 🙂
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I like the way you combine the warmth and the cold. But I agree with Jane…(K)
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Thanks, Kerfe. I understand that, living in the kind of cold you all experience is not easy, just as living in the kind of heat we live in during summers can be a torture.
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Extremes are never easy.
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The photo made me shiver, but your poem was heartwarming, Punam! ❤
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Cheryl, thank you so much for your warm words. ❤️
How are you? Hope all is well.
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We are well, Punam. ❤ Thank you for asking. Our internet was down for a week, and we are dealing with repairing hidden damage from the hurricane. Insurance will cover a new roof and other repairs when we find a roofer who can do the work before spring. Many cannot do the job for 4-6 months.
All the best to you and your family!
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Oh, my! I did not know you had faced so many problems. I am glad the damages will be covered by insurance. Spring is a long way away. Take care and keep us posted. Much love to you. ❤️
Thanks for your wishes.
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Great imagery….you worked the prompt well! These lines, I am especially smitten with:
“I dream of the biting, moaning wind
ice cold and stiff feet-hands, blush pink nose.” I can feel the wind and stiffness and cold in your words!
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Thanks a lot, Lillian. It is easy to live winter here as it is not very severe.
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What a picture you painted! I grew up in the hills and was instantly reminded of the snowy winter days.
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Thanks, Sonia. Delhi winter is mild in comparison, isn’t it!
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A wonderful anthem!
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Thank you, Margaret!
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Such beautiful images, Punam. It is a very dreary December here right now, but I’m not anxious for the cold!
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Thanks a lot, Merril. Here too, December, so far, has been quite warm. No rains, yet.
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You’re welcome. I think we may see sunshine today. 🙂
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Well someone needs to embrace winter and you’ve done it here so beautifully.
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Exactly, Mish! Thanks a lot.
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You’ve painted a vivid winter scene with your words, Punam! Beautiful take on the prompts.
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Thank you, Eugi!
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This is so dreamy!! Sigh especially love this part; “When lazy, silvery ponderous puffs pervade and heavy, grey, lumbering smoke collides with them a hazy shade of winter are days but I’ve got my love to keep me warm!” 😀
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Thanks so much, Sanaa! Glad thise lines resonated with you. ❤️😊
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I have to say I am in the middle of all that cold weather… it’s not quite as nice when you live with it.
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I agree, Björn. Extreme cold or extreme heat is not easy to live with.
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love the sentiment in this piece ❤
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Thanks a lot, AJ! ❤️😊
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Punam you captured so many sensory aspects of winter, you bring it to life.
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Thanks a lot, Li.
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You’re welcome.
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great use of the prompts to paint a chilly cold season … so glad we’re in summer, even if the wind is foul 🙂
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Thanks, sis. I prefer the mild winters here to the harsh summers.
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most do, the advantage of living in the Himalayas was that our summers weren’t too bad … going down to Kangra to shop was like hitting a heatwave! Also meant we had snow and unbearable cold in winter …
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The conundrum of northern India…harsh winters/mild summers or vice versa. 😀
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indeed, I am so grateful to be back in a more temperate climate 🙂
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You are lucky, sis. 😊❤️
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How a chilly subject can be so heartwarming, I really don’t know! Nice one.
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Keith, what a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much.
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Lovely picture and wonderful poem Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. 🙏🏼❤️
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Welcome Punam 💖
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Punam I’m late to the party but had to comment anyway! This is the way it is – we look for love to sustain in the winters of our lives… ❤
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That’s beautifully said, Val! Thanks so much and no one’s ever late to poetry party. The party is always on. ❤️
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Nice read .
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Thanks you!
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Pleasure!
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Beautifully weaved, dear Punam! ❤️
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Dearest Jeff, thanksa lot. ❤️
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A vivid painting of winter, Punam. Wonderful. My hands and feet are cold and you say it’s warm here. May be old age…:)
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Ha, Indira! Delhi is still not very cold. Where do you stay?
Thank you so much.
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Near Delhi, Gurugram, Haryana. After coming from Visakhapatnam, I am finding it hard to cope at 75.
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Ah! Of course, after Vishakhapatnam it will feel cold in the north. I understand. 🤗
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🙂
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I’ll remember this when putting footprints in snow!
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So nice of you to say so! Thank you.
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Thanks, Eugi.
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Baby it’s cold outside but your love keeps us warm and your gift with words of course Punam! ❣️
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Aww! A warm thanks, Cindy! ❣️
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warm hug back 🤗❣️
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