
Winter’s indulgence
indulgence of life’s transience
transient tastes triumph
triumphant nature
nature’s gifts reaped together
to gather to toast
toast, waffles and jam
jampacked is family do
doing mother’s will
Written for Sadje’s wdys, Eugi’s moonwashed musings weekly prompt and David’s W3 (a chain verse of at least 3 haiku including the word mother, by Aishwarya). Sharing at dVerse OLN.
Happy Thanksgiving to all those who celebrate.
How beautifully unique! (somehow I managed to turn off my blog comments, unable to access the posts for your wonderful challenge, now I must return, read and leave comments .. well deserved I am certain.)
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Thanks a lot, Helen!
Just wanted to let you know, I loved your response.
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Love the chain of haiku verses! A toast to family get togethers!
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Thanks a lot, Grace.
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Happy Thanksgiving!
Joanna
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Thanks, Joanna!
Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
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This is just perfect for thanksgiving and being a family together
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Thanks, Björn.
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Rushed seasons add speed
The frost on top adds worry
Fir trees lift their arms
And new food arrives
For chickadees are hungry
Still squirrel eats last
Snow is melting now
Exposing green grass beneath
Tulips wait their turn
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Love the turning of season in your verse.
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Me likee
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🥰
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Punam, what a tasty smorgasbord of gifts. I can feel celebration in the air.
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Thanks so much, Li!
Happy Thanksgiving! ❤️
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You’re very welcome.
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To gather–always reason for celebration. (K)
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Absolutely! Thanks, Kerfe, and Happy Thanksgiving.
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Thanks Punam.
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You are welcome.
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I love this poetic form. The repetition gives it a musical flow. Thanks a lot my friend for joining in.
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Delighted that you liked it, Sadje. Thank you so much.
Always a pleasure. ❤️
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You’re always welcome my friend
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The chain verse is masterful!! Now I’ve got to get going with the W3 prompt…
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Thanks, Val. Yours will be outstanding. ❤️
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You have such talent Punam. How you captured all of those prompts in this lovely poem is amazing 💕☺️
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Christine, thanks so much, my friend! 🥰🙏🏼
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I like the way you’ve used the form: so appropriate to this moment! ❤️
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! 🥰
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I love this form; you’ve done it justice!
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Thanks so much, Jay!
How are you?
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I’m good, Punam 😊
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Great! 👍🏼😊
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Expertly done there Punam, loved how you weaved all the prompts together; to gather (cleverly done) into an enjoyable poem. 👏👏👌👌❤️❤️
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Thanks so much, Ken. Glad you enjoyed it. 😊❤️🙏🏼
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A beautifully written masterpiece, Punam. Thank you for joining in.
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Eugi, thank you kindly and always a pleasure. ❤️
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Most welcome, Punam.
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Happy Thanksgiving to you too Punam and a wonderful poem 😊🙏🏼
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Thanks so much, dear Kamal. 🙏🏼😊
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Welcome dear Punam 💖
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Very unique! I loved the sound of “together / to gather to toast”.
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Thanks a lot.
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I really liked the style that you chose of three haikus. I don’t think I’ve seen that yet, but it’s effectively powerful. Thank you so much for sharing, and Happy Thanksgiving 🦃
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
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You’re very welcome 😊
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beautiful skill deployed in these, Enjoyed🤍
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Thanks a lot, Jude. 💙
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My pleasure💖
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Such a wonderful poem, an ode to Thanksgiving indeed! The flow of the tune in your Chain verse is quite melodic. 🙂
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Thanks, Aishwarya! It was a wonderful prompt. 😊
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Either Mother’s will or MIL’s will… 😉 The Family Glue?
…Just last eve out to dinner – one whole contingent should have just stayed home (as one was ill and didn’t even eat)… but the ‘Mother’ got what she wanted. (I was just observing…again – as a mother myself there really isn’t much I demand of my own – now that they are grown.)
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Mothers/MILs always get what they want, isn’t it! 😉
I must admit, I let my teenagers be. 😊
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Once past the ‘Teen’ bits, then we can be friends with our ‘chillens’ 😉
Sometimes though adult children need to stand up for themselves. 🙂
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I agree on both counts. 😄
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I remember the first few times I had to quit jobs because I didn’t agree with my ‘bosses’ –
Not easy, especially when the boss has a big ego.
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I guess their ego is what makes them “bossy”!
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Always the ego!
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Indeed.
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This flows magically, Punam
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Thanks, David. 💖
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Natures gifts indeed, a deeper underpinning of a fabulous feast.
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Thanks, Paul. 🙂
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Hi, Punam ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the wonderful Sylvia, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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Thanks, David. ❤️
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*hug*
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lovely write with gifts of the season Punam.. hope yours was happy!~ ❣️
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Cindy, thank you so much! I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving.
Mine was good. ❤️❤️
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You’re so welcome and I so did.. Happy you did too! 💞
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