
He stood there hands folded
Head bowed reverentially
Eyes closed devoutly
Lips murmuring an incantation.
He was his first
And the last resort
He had always turned to him
In good times
As well as bad.
He was the praying sort
Had always been.
His prayers were oft not heard
But his faith was unshakable
Today of all days
He needed intervention the most
It was a matter of life and death
But there was only inscrutable, godly silence
Like always.
Written for Sadje’s wdys.
A beautiful poem Punam. Praying itself gives us courage and confidence that things will get better. Thanks for this profound take.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Always a pleasure.
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You’re most welcome
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Thank you.
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Thanks, Michael.
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This is relatable. Beautifully written, Punam
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Thanks a lot, Shweta. 🙂
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You’re welcome ☺️
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The prayers, usually don’t get answered, and that made us, question the, existence of, that, higher, power, which in turn, leads us to, look, inward, and that’s where, we are to, discover, the strength, we have, to, tackle whatever issues we’re, facing in our, lives
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True that. It is also said god helps only those who help themselves.
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“inscrutable, godly silence
Like always.” Brilliant line Punam, brilliant poem indeed! 👏👏👌👌 I can relate! 👍👍
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Thanks so much, Ken. I am glad you can relate. 🙏🏼😊
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🙏😁😊
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like always.
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❤️
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Powerful imagery Punam……… “Like always”
“But there was only inscrutable, godly silence”
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Thanks a lot, Cindy. ❤️
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You’re always welcome Punam!❣️❣️
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So well done! Seems everyone has a similar take on this prompt – but the differences are all there and each one stunning! Punam this one is a keeper!
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Val, when responses are similar yet different, it shows we think alike and express in our own way. Thank you. ❤️
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Oh, those uncertain moments. Prayer helps a lot by the way. Gives the soul a little peace and hope. This is wonderful ❤
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Indeed, Lamittan, it does. Thanks, my friend. ❤️
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Your verily welcome, my friend. 💕 ❤💕
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I like your “like always” that leaves it open to interpretation.
I am not a person of faith, but it must be comforting.
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Thanks, Merril. Faith is a very personal matter, so I thought I would leave it open-ended…
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You’re welcome. 😊
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We ask for help from higher forces, but in the end the responsibility is ours to bear. (K)
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True words, Kerfe.
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Will his faith remain unshakeable if today, of all days his prayer remains unheard?
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Good question, Keith! I guess it varies from person to person.
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I did not like the lines from my mother’s daily prayers sung loud, to the effect that ‘I’m weak and look up to you for deliverance.” I think daily words like these weaken the will. But to each her own. Maybe she derived strength from it.
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Yes, maybe, Reena. There are those who find strength in complete surrender.
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I think that the true magic of prayer is that it calms the mind. Whenever I recite the rosary, I come out thinking clearer and quite refreshed. It’s like meditation, and encourages actions.
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That’s wonderful, Jude. Thanks for sharing. 🙏🏼
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“silence is the language of god,
all else is poor translation.”
– Rumi
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Rumi’s wisdom transcends time.
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Sounds very neutral. I like it, it has me on the edge of my seat.
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Thank you. Was trying to take a balanced view.
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I can tell. You did great. I love when there’s nuance and mild sarcasm.
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🙏🏼❤️
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When I think of some prayers I sometimes think of this story;
There was a flood. Everyone was warned to evacuate.
One man did not want to leave his home.
Firetrucks came down the street with bull horns – “Evacuate, Now!”
He would not leave.
The streets flooded. A resucue boat came by, he waved them away.
Soon he was on the roof of his home… A helicopter tried a resuce –
He would not leave.
He died.
When he got to heaven he complained I prayed to be saved! Where was God??… A booming voice repliled; “I sent a firetruck telling you to leave, I sent a rescue boat, then a helicopter … what more did you want???”
Sometimes we need to help ourselves by seeing what is right there in front of our eyes. Not everything is hidden.
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Wonderful share, Jules. We ought to help ourselves first, before seeking divine intervention.
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Perhaps in helping ourselves we are already using divine intervention (by listening to our intution… which some believe is a divine gift) …if that is what we wish to believe 🙂
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Prayer can be tricky at times…
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They sure can, especially when asking for something…
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It’s kind of missing the point of prayer doing that, I think!
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ouch I can relate to this … it’s called karma 🙂
Praying for others sure alleviates our worry, group prayers can be powerful but the more selfish kind are seldom answered …
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You are so right, sis.
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how’s all that busyness going?
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Ah! I wish I had a short and simple answer, sis.
Both my kids are having their exams this month, hubby has already been called to take classes where he was teaching before he sailed. To top it we are having repair and renovation at home because a pipe in the bathroom had sprung a leak. Phew! 😅
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wow sounds like you are going to need a holiday after all this … as soon as those exams are over! Hubby can join you as time allows 🙂 Take care precious
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Hehe! No holiday for me, Kate. School/college resume as soon as exams end.
Thank you so much. ❤️
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so no break for the kids either … that’s cruel!
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Due to the pandemic, they are lagging behind in completing the syllabus. Can’t complain because their studies did take a beating these last two years.
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oh ok I forgot about that hiccup … but surely as an ex-teacher you gave them the full curriculum 🙂
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I am an ex-teacher but I can’t teach all the subjects, especially to a tenth grader and the college kiddo has a different stream. I never studied physics in college! So this mom is just a mom now! 😉😅
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lol weak excuse dear heart, you are smart enough to pick it up as you go along …physics, smart cookies you got there sis!
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Nah! Honest reason, sis! I haven’t taught formally for years now. The syllabus is different and the board too.
Yeah, both of them are smarter than me! 😄
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don’t let domestic bliss dumb you down sis … given the chance you can put your mind to anything! Look at the brilliant gifted poetry you churn out 🙂
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It’s not just domesticity, I guess it is ageing too and the brain cells which are not used wither away. I can’t say about brilliance, but my poetic muscles are being exercised every day, so they are in fine fettle. 😄
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Gorgeous poem, dear Punam!
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Thanks so much, Jeff! ❤️
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