
The Lonely Lady moved with stately stature
unrelenting against the unforgiving sea
valiantly weathering wuthering waves
under the cataclysmic colour of night
the gales of November battered it from all sides
yet it battled on, refusing to be swept away
the waves broke over the railing
the derricks, the anchor; all were creaking
with a grim look on his face and his hand on the helm
for hours the captain remained rock steady
he had faced the inclement seas earlier too
but never seen it turn fifty shades of grey
but the hurricane did not tire of whistling endlessly
it whined and moaned, singing a dirge
then one last time the wind in the wires made a tattle-tale sound
with one last hiccup, under the Cherry Moon, the Lonely Lady went down.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Lillian, has given us a list movies that were awarded Razzies and asked us to include atleast one title in our poem. Here’s the list.
Shining Through (1982)
The Lonely Lady (1983)
Under the Cherry Moon (1986)
Cocktail (1988)
Indecent Proposal (1993)
Color of Night (1994)
Showgirls (1995)
The Postman (1997)
Battlefield Earth (2000)
Swept Away (2002)
Catwoman (2004)
I Know Who Killed Me (2007)
Fifty Shades of Grey (2015)
The words in bold are the titles I have incorporated.
I was listening to The Wreck of Edmund Fitzgerald, when I sat down to write this poem. The words in italics are from the song and my tribute to my favourite artist, Gordon Lightfoot.
What a fabulous sea tale you’ve told here in your poem! And you used Fifty Shades of Grey so very well. Just an excellent response to the prompt!
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Thanks, Lillian. Fifty shades did seem apt to convey the moody seas.
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Fun approach to have the Lonely Lady be a ship.
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Thanks, Maria.
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That. Was. Epic.
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Thank you so much.
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Nooooo…. I want the Lonely Lady to stand tall … At least in poems and stories.
The ghalib couplet comes to mind .
‘hum ko maloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin…… Dil ke khush rakhne ko..
U know the rest π
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I too would never want a shop to sink and you know why. But somehow a happy ending seemed contrived.
Khayal to achha hi tha par…π
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A great song and interpretation. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe. Indeed, a great song. π
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Well done!
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Thanks, Barbara.
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My pleasure! π·
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oh such a wonderful wright Punam and I almost wanted to be on that boat with your beautiful imagery. Thank god I got my senses at the very end. nicely penned my friend!!!β£οΈ
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Thank god, you were not there, Cindy! Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. β€οΈ
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wouldn’t that have been write.. lol. Thank God I wasn’t but I’ll be there when the tides change β€οΈ
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I especially love the tribute to Gordon!
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Thanks, Paula. β€οΈ
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I love how you incorporated the song lyrics. A wonderful tribute!
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Thanks a lot, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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Gordon Lightfoot was a big favorite of mine and I loved that song!!
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How wonderful, Val!
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I enjoyed the telling of this tale. I live on one of the Great Lakes where many ships have met their demise. I have to say that was a refreshing way to use “fifty shades of grey”.
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Oh wow, Mish, I didn’t know that! My husband is a sailor and he says sailing through the Great Lakes is an unmatchable experience. Yes, too many shipwrecks there.
Thank you so much.
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Doubly well done, Punam, for incorporating not only the film titles but also lyrics from the song. I love the way you played with words and created sound in this poem, especially the βweathering wuthering wavesβ, βbattered it from all sides / yet it battled onβ and βthe wind in the wires made a tattle-tale soundβ.
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Kim, thank you so much! I am so delighted you enjoyed those efforts at wordplay. Much appreciated.
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You’re more than welcome, Punam. π
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Excellent poem Punam. Iβm sure you might have drawn from the experience of your better halfβs experience at sea too.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Indeed, I have and mine too …we faced very tough seas twice or thrice.
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Youβre most welcome. This builds the resilience and strength needed to steer the ship of life. Awesome
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The Lonely Lady is a perfect name for a ship.
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I am glad you agree, Jane. π
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Of course, The Lonely Lady would be a ship! The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald is such a great song, and this poem fits so well. A wonderful response to the prompt, Punam!
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Of course, Merril! π Thank you so much, I appreciate your words. π
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You’re most welcome, Punam! π
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Brilliant!!! The turbulence is felt through and at the sinking a kind of out breath.
You drew us readers in.
Muchπlove
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Gillena, thank you so very much! π
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Gorgeous, gorgeous tribute poem, Punam! Wow! π
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Thanks a lot, Sanaa! πβ€οΈ
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You’re so good, Punam…
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Thank you, David. β€οΈππΌ
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Gordon Lightfoot nha?
This is a stunning poem.
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Thanks a lot, Jude. But Gordon Lightfoot is something.
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You did a fantastic job weaving the song lyrics and movie titles together. Funny, I have been listening to Gordon Lightfoot recently. I saw another blogger post one of his videos and the bug was planted in my ear.
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Thanks so much. Gordon Lightfoot is always on my playlist.
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A wonderful tale of the sea Punam, it draws one in and does not disappoint. Excellent writing my friend! πβπΌπβ€οΈ
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Thanks so much, Rob! β€οΈπ
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Oh, what a tragic and compelling story! I could almost visualise the ambience created and actions that followed till the ship sank. A good piece indeed. π
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Lamittan, thanks a lot! Much appreciated.
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Much obliged, dear Punam.
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I can see it’s inspired by GLs rendition … one of my favourites of his π
a bit too close to home sis!
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I know…too close but all fiction. π€πΌπ€πΌπ
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yes I know you love doing these dark pieces that reek of reality π you do them so well!
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I love your alliteration and imagery here, Punam – fine work with the prompt! π
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! β€οΈπ
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Superb and splendid poem Punam π
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Thank you, dear Kamal. β€οΈππΌ
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Welcome dear Punam π
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Love how you incorporated the titles and the song perfect
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Thank you! β€οΈ
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Wonderful tale you’ve told here!
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Thank you!
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Well done, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Dwight.
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