
No clear skies, no moon, no stars
only haze hangs low over the concrete maze
verdant greens wear a sooty grey suit
malevolent air chokes the throat
babies and elders are trapped indoors
effing cough refuses to subside, making everyone
reach for the ubiquitous air purifiers!
Written for David’s W3 to Paula’s prompt to write an acrostic on November.
Feels so sad …what are we doing??
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“We” are doing nothing, that is the tragedy! Lives are being affected, so what! We have too much of a population to spare.
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Sigh…..
We have too muxh population to spare
We have too little awareness to see the harm we are doing
We have too little compassion to do something for the future generations
We have too much greed to thibk of anything else except making big bucks!
Sorry for the rant… Could not stop myself:(
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Don’t apologise, beta. A rant begets a rant! I am so frustrated with how things are. Venting helps…
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Smog, taking over the planet, and yet, until, we are, directly, threatened by it personally, we don’t, feel, compelled, to, act.
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Sadly, that is not happening. Everyone keeps passing the buck…no one wants to act.
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It’s the same here in Lahore 😳
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I know. 😓
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😷
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Yeah, just when the masks were off, we are back to them and that too N95!
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Yes, for one reason or another, we are forced to wear masks
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Sadly the same story gets repeated every year Punam. At this rate doomsday doesn’t seem very far. Seriously don’t know what we are leaving behind for our children.
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I agree, Radhika. These last few days have been terrible. Every year all we get is empty promises. Closing down schools or restricting vehicles doesn’t help much.
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This is so terrible, Punam. I didn’t realize this was an every November situation. What an awful thing–and no one doing anything.
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It is awful, Merril. The government is not interested in taking tough measures…vote bank politics.
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I’m sorry. That’s so awful.
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But since yesterday, due to wind, the air quality has improved a bit.
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That’s good!
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Please remind me again what it is that is being burned off, Punam? It is totally unacceptable that steps are not being taken to improve air quality.
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Tracy, there are farm fires in neighbouring states, especially Punjab. After rice is harvested, the stubble is burnt because that is the cheapest and fastest method to clear fields before the next crop is sown. The seeder machines are very expensive and though the Punjab government is loaning them to farmers, there are very few of them.
But, there is a huge BUT, the air quality of Delhi is poor throughout the year and gets exacerbated in winters due to these farm fires, fire crackers burst during Diwali and the slow movement of cold dense air.
Vehicular pollution is very conveniently blamed, and to be honest those large diesel trucks do contribute. But firewood is being used by the poor as cooking gas has become prohibitively expensive. Despite there being compost pits in most parks( and Delhi does have many parks) leaves are burnt. This is also the season of mosquitoes and to repel them people burn anything…from paper, cardboard, styrofoam to discarded tyres. Phew!
I could go on and on, Tracy. The problem lies in the intention. The government/bureaucrats, those in power are not ready to bring in changes which will inconvenience people in the short term but mitigate this problem in the long run.
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It looks like the Government does nothing except to make some cosmetic announcements and make people get used to this Smog! An issue that happens every year this time. Real sad.
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Exactly. They just don’t seem to care. It is our tragedy.
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It sounds dire, Punam.
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It is Tracy. Winters are extremely bad in North India.
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So sorry for this situation, Punam. You’ve expressed it beautifully. Hugs 💕🙂
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Thanks a lot, Harmony. 🙂💕
We face it every year.
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It’s a heartbreaking situation, and worse, that no one “in charge” anywhere seems to care. It is their children and grandchildren they are killing too. Inhuman. (K)
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If only they were far sighted enough, Kerfe. Passing the buck is their favourite game.
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Everywhere.
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😢💔
London is bathing in brilliant sunshine today!
It’s all going wrong 😟
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Good to know London is having sunshine, Lesley. ❤️
Here everything is wrong. 😢
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Sorry to hear this 🙁It is most troubling.
However, today in London it is continuous rain 🌧 💕
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It sure is, Lesley. But since yesterday the air quality has improved a bit.
London and rains cannot be parted! 😉😀
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It’s a good job I love the rain 😁
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Powerful poem and sad 🌹
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Thank you. 🙂
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❤️
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So sad a situation – and your poem paints the picture in fine detail! That it is an acrostic makes it even more impressive…
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Thanks, Val. It is a terrible situation. I haven’t stepped out for the past week. My kids wear N95 masks to school/college.
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Looks like Belgrade these days.
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I know!! Is Belgrade usually so polluted?
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It’s never been this bad. When you have a corrupt goverment, problems keep piling up and apparently this isn’t priority.
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Sigh…same story.
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Yep, and nothing is being done about it except passing the buck. Powerful poem, Punam!
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Exactly, Eugi. Thank you.
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I’m sorry ye have to go through that horrible; poisonous pollution Punam! But this is a tremendous poem full of great imagery. 👏👏👌👌
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Thanks, Ken. A poet sees an opportunity in every situation. 😅
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Indeed they do Punam, indeed they do! 👍💯😛 There’s a poem in everything that you see and everything that happens to you.
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So sad to hear. This can’t be helping your son’s asthma. Praying for easing of the pollution for his sake as well. Take care.
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It is very sad. Thanks do much for your concern and prayers, Dora. ❤️
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Clever and effective writing! But unfortunate situation
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Yes, it is unfortunate.
Thanks, JYP.
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I’ve been stuck in that Delhi daze desperate to escape to HP, sympathy to you all. Always used a face mask and hand sterilizer in Delhi and Kathmandu so during this pandemic these were no big adjustment for me … but to be locked into living there, my heart goes out to you all sis!
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It is even worse than what it was when you were here! Only time will tell how lives are being affected by this level of pollution! Not easy staying here, sis but….
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please do all you can to stay healthy! is it possible to relocate now hubbies job has changed?
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We are trying our best, desr Kate. Have limited outdoor activities.
Hubby’s job has not exactly changed. He has been alternating between teaching and sailing for the past many years. We are here mainly for the kids education. Delhi offers better chances for higher education. And now with son’s condition, Delhi offers better medical care.
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beggar that you are tied there for worthy reasons … but I would be happier knowing you were exploring options? India has many large cities with good medical services and surely hubbies work would fly him in and out? Anyway no point in having a great education if your actual health is in peril … love you all!
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Kate, sadly the other big cities have no less pollution. It is just that Nov to Jan it is really bad in Delhi. I agree good education at the cost of health is not a good bargain but moving out of Delhi too doesn’t solve the problem. The only option is to move out of India.
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well I’d love to have you here sis, you’d all be welcome 🙂
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I love the setting and scene you’ve created here. The power of words. Oh sweet, this is amazing 👏
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Thanks so much, Lamittan!
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You’re most welcome, my friend.
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We are destroying our environment. A wonderful poem Punam.
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So we are, Kamal! Thanks. 🙏🏼
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Welcome dear Punam 🙏🏼
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This is a global problem, and no one is immune! I am so sorry that you are suffering from smog. When I lived in the beautiful rural Shenandoah Valley of Virginia thirty years ago, we used to experience inversion layers in the summer. Thank you for sharing this vivid poem about air pollution. We all need to be concerned!
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That’s interesting, Cheryl! Was it only during summers?
Pollution is indeed a global problem, Cheryl, and should worry everyone. Thank you for reading and your concern. ❤️
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Yes, it seemed to be a summer problem there. Polluted air settled over the valley and stayed for prolonged periods. The horizon had a brownish hue.
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Oh, dear! It is the same here throughout the winters.
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Yucky! Good acrostic 😀
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It is! Thanks, Paula. 😊
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A very grim but true poem.
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Thanks, Tanmay. Grim situation in Delhi.
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Oh Man Punam.. this is so well penned and soooo sad.. I’m snuggling to find words through the suffering right now and then the election’s on now too. ugh!!! nicely done. ❣️
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It is sad, Cindy. Thanks so much for your commiseration. ❤️
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💗🥲💗 Always Punam❣️
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Hi, Punam! I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our friend Larry, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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Thanks, David. Will check out. 👍🏼
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*hug*
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