
Off they went into shroud of mist
a day break tryst
no prying eyes
no need for lies
So inviting; fruit forbidden
they were smitten
gentle, morn light
oh so quiet!
Alas! raucous birds‘ noisy racket
they pulled jackets
traced back their steps
their tryst a hex!
Written for Sadje’s wdys, David’s W3 to Lesley’s prompt (a humourous minute poem) and Eugi’s moonwashed weekly challenge.
(Will catch up with reading tonight)
Oh no, how unfortunate that their well laid plans were spoiled. Thanks Punam for joining in with this fun take.
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Thanks, Sadje and my pleasure.
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💖💖💖
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It’s always the bird’s fault isn’t it Punam?! 😁😉😂
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Lol! To be honest, Ken, not always. 😅😉
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Haha! 😛😛😂😂
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😂😂
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Beautiful poem!
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Thanks, Veera.
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I can hear those blue jays now…(no trysts around here for sure) (K)
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How wonderful. Here, I can hear the cawing.
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There’s always somebird watching!
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Always. 😅
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Hehe! Even the best laid plans can be sidelined by nature!!
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Ha! True that, Val!
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Love it! Those birds see all and tell all – caw caw! Brilliantly peened, Punam!
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They certainly do, Eugi! Thanks a lot.
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oh, no! not a hex! 😉
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😉😉
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Foiled by the birds! 🙂
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Lol yes!
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Deep and profound poem Punam 🙏🏼
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Kamal, very kind of you! Thanks a lot. 🙏🏼❤️
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You are always welcome dear Punam 💖😊😊
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lol you drew me right in then pooped on me, well done sis!
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Lol sis! That’s how life is! Thanks a lot.
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you sure got that right 😉
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😃
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Haha – ‘the best laid plans’ and all…
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Hehe! Exactly that…
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Oh, I love this my dearest Punam!
Sending love
xoxo
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Gab, thank you so much, hon! Love back at ya! ❤️❤️
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Thank you hon 🙏🌹
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A lovely write, Punam! ❤ But what a shame it didn't go according to plan. The image looked ominous from the outset though. I hope they made it home okay even if not together ❤
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Sunra, many thanks and congratulations on being chosen as POW last week. That sonnet was so good and totally deserving.❤️
I am so sorry I couldn’t find time to write to your prompt.
Next time, for sure, will give it a shot. ❤️
The image is ominous and I had almost written something for it but due to paucity of time I combined two prompts and the sinister became comical. 😅
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Thank you, Punam! And no problem, don’t concern yourself at all! Writing time is precious, so replying and honouring fellow bloggers posts/prompts on top of that takes even more! Wishing you a great week, my dear ❤
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You are so welcome. Thanks for understanding. ❤️
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I love how these words flow together. Wonderful write, Punam. ❤️
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Jeff, you are very kind. Thanks a lot, my friend. ❤️
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You always surprise and entertain Punam. Wonder what the birds thought.. lol
Well done! ❣️
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Cindy, thank you so much, my dear. ❤️
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Hi, Punam ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by the lovely Sunra Rainz, is now live:
Enjoy 🙂
~David
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Punam,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by Sylvia Cognac, is now live:
Enjoy!
❤
David
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Hi, David! Thanks so much for letting me know. I am sorry I couldn’t participate last time. I am still responding to comments I received ten days ago but I will surely try this week as I have time till Sunday.
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💘 Punam 💘
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This gave me a good laugh, Punam! ❤ We can all use a good laugh now and then! 🙂
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We sure can, Cheryl! Delighted that you enjoyed it. 😀❤️
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