Bubbling to death

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Stay on the back-burner for a while
I pleaded with my passion
let me play other roles for now
you have to learn some patience

I could see it floundering
in a rush to be ahead of others
flailing and falling helplessly
so it needed to feel before flourishing

Stepping back would help it ferment
and then foment with excitement
slowly stewing steeped in its juices
to effervesce with vigour and vivacity

alas! I let it be for too long
it started feeding on its fetid self
my passion that was raring to go
bubbled and frothed to putrid death.

Written for dVerse poetics. Li had asked us to write on fermentation. Since I am late, I am sharing it at OLN.

53 thoughts on “Bubbling to death

  1. Punam, it fits the patterns so well when things are carried into the extreme. It’s true with fermentation as well. With kombucha, it turns to vinegar — but can still be used as a cleaning agent 🙂 Others, not so useful lol except to end a cycle and make way for a new beginning. Wise poeming!

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  2. Stepping back would help it ferment
    and then foment with excitement
    slowly stewing steeped in its juices
    to effervesce with vigour and vivacity

    Exactly what is needed and craved for Punam! A pity lots of the reverse seems to rule the day!

    Hank

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  3. It is hard to be all things to all people. Many parents, especially women, have postponed their dreams. For some, it may be too late. for others, retirement and an empty nest give them new opportunities. This is the interpretation that came to mind. I think there may be many others.

    A very vivid and eloquent poem, Punam! ❤

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    1. Love your interpretation, Cheryl. You are so right, women always postpone their dreams and desires for family and sometimes it is too late. Thanks ever so much for your lovely reflection. ❤️

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