
Alas!
If only it were possible to earn
even a shred of pittance at a time
for when I think I have an upper hand
she smirks and puts me two steps back
spent spring unaware of her designs
all summer railed against her biases
as autumn approaches, I am much resigned
I’ll do me, she’ll do her; till winter arrives.
Written for David’s W3 to Steven’s prompt and Eugi’s moonwashed weekly challenge.
Steven has asked us to respond to ‘Superiority of fate’ by Emily Dickinson.
‘Superiority to Fate’
Superiority of fate
Is difficult to gain
’Tis not conferred of Any But possible to earn
A pittance at a time
Until to Her surprise
The Soul with strict economy
Subsist till Paradise.
Excellent take Punam. Love the last stanza. We have to resign to fate ultimately
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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My pleasure dear friend
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Excellent response, Punam. I suppose we can never know what fate has in store. 🙂
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I suppose so too! Thanks, Merril. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Punam!
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Splendid and excellent poem so well composed Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Kamal, thank you so much. 🙏🏼❤️😊
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Welcome Punam.
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Yes, the journey from one to the other comes suddenly, still, perhaps it doesn’t end there…
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No, perhaps not…
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Yes, maybe beyond beginnings and endings…
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Wonderful, Punam! “I’ll do me, she’ll do her” … spot on. Bravo 💕🙂
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Thanks so much for concurring, Harmony. ❤️🙂
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Amazing piece, Punam! I love “I’ll do me, she’ll do her”. We never know what fate has in store so best to live each day to the fullest.
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You are absolutely right, living each day to the fullest is the key. Thanks so much. ❤️
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Most welcome, Punam!
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You capture the fatalism with lightness of words and tone, like Dickinson. 🌹
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That’s a huge compliment, Dora! Thank you. ❤️❤️
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Punam this one made me read it twice! I love the flow and the resignation BUT then the last line hints at a rebellion!!! Wow!
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Val, thanks for the double read and the wow! I so appreciate that. ❤️
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Beautiful, dear Punam. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Jeff. ❤️
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Patience is required… (K)
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I agree. Thanks, Kerfe.
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This is so imaginative, Punam, and a great response to the prompt poem!
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Ingrid, thanks! ❤️🥰
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Very deep, Punam. Fate is dealing some very heavy hands of late. Hopefully we all come out of this stronger. It does feel dier of late.
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I hope so too, Jude! Thanks so much.
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Excellent response, Punam, and the line (my interpretation) of going separate ways.
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Tracy, thanks so much. ❤️ (right interpretation)
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wonderful job on the prompt Punam!! ❤️
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Cindy, glad you think so! Much appreciated, my friend. 💖💖
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Absolutely, dear.. I sure did and you’re most welcome❣️
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Is it just me, or is there a thread of dark humor running through this piece, Punam? 😀
~David
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And I thought it was very dark to be fathomed! 😅🤦🏻♀️
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Punam,
I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Lesley, is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/10/12/w3-prompt-24-weave-written-weekly/
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with 😀
Much love,
David
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Hi David! Thanks for letting me know. This week has been very hectic, I haven’t responded to a single challenge! 😅 Lesley’s guidelines won’t let me combine all the prompts. 😆
But I promise to give it a shot as soon as possible. ❤️
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🤗
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