
Little man, wipe that smile
don’t look as pleased as punch
victories are often short-lived
on this thought, do munch
you have thrown enough lame punches
now hear the music of bone crunch
winter is around the corner,
just wait. You’ll get sucker punched!
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, De, has asked us to pack a punch ie use Punch in our quadrille.
Wow! This is so visceral:
“you have thrown enough lame punches
now hear the music of bone crunch”
So well done.
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Glad you liked it. Thank you!
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I agree, visceral. And though I don’t condone violence, somehow, I think he asked for it!
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Merril, I too don’t condone violence but he certainly will meet his fate.
Thank you.
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You’re very welcome!
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Karma gonna catch up with that gremlin!
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I hope it happens soon, Li!
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I just hope it will happen… alas there will be so much more bad coming before he gets his comeuppance I fear.
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I fear that too, Björn.
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Dear Punam,
I concur with Björn Rudberg (brudberg) and I understand your sentiment and frustration. Speaking of Putin whom some would describe as “a small-spirited, petty bully– with nukes”, in my post entitled “We have Paleolithic Emotions; Medieval Institutions; and God-like Technology“, I have created and featured the following image:
This illustration has a resolution of 4038 by 2539 pixels and is titled “We have Paleolithic Emotions; Medieval Institutions; and God-like Technology with Nuclear Holocaust“.
Regarding Russia, you only need to substitute the lady in the foreground with an image of Putin, and perhaps change some or all of the medieval buildings to their Russian counterparts in order to depict “We have Putin, Russia and Nukes”.
As for the USA, you can do the same by replacing the lady with Trump or any other pro-nuclear agents.
The world ecological crisis and the threat of nuclear war aside, we are perhaps already accelerating inexorably towards some eventual calamities or runaway cataclysms, being well on track in facilitating a wholesale and terminal decline of Homo sapiens, a species unable to transcend its own fate, incapable of fathoming let alone solving the great riddle of life, and succumbing in due course to not merely a surfeit of wayward violence and aggressive expansion but also exiguous comprehension of its own existential mess, pernicious strain and destructive streak, never mind the spectres of an even deadlier pandemic (whether zoonotic or genetically engineered), industrial disaster, biochemical apocalypse and nuclear holocaust as well as all-out cyberwarfare, cyberterrorism and cyberattacks.
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Thanks for sharing the excellent image. One lives on hope.
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Dear Punam,
You are very welcome to visit and read my post entitled “We have Paleolithic Emotions; Medieval Institutions; and God-like Technology“, from which the image is sourced.
I look forward to interacting with you at the said post, as I am keen and curious about what you will make of it symbolically, intellectually, aesthetically and/or spiritually.
Happy reading!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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How does violence propagate?
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Not propagating violence, more of metaphorical punches.
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A punch nonetheless? “The pen is mightier than the sword.” – Edward Bulwer Lytton
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Writers can throw only paper punches. If only pen was mightier in these times!
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Seems the US Constitution is heavy paper
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This was real therapy to me, thanks so much Punam..
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Ain, thank you! I am not of a violent temperament but if I could, I would love to punch him!
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I liked your roundup of the punch types (you forgot the drinking kind). Sorry someone had to get hurt here.
BTW, I added a fiction label to mine, it wasn’t a true storyy.
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I would have loved to Jim, but in 44 words I could only throw punches!
Thanks for letting us know it was fiction.
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If anybody deserves a punch in the face (and elsewhere) he’s your man.
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Couldn’t agree more, Jane.
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Feels just like that…every year. Love the rhyme.
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Thanks a lot, K.
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Amen. And I’d add: PLEASE put your shirt back on.
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Oh, yes! Please!!
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That picture is perfect for your punchy, pithy, little poem. The “bone crunch” soo works!!
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Thanks so much, Tricia! Yes, I too thought the pic is apt.
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💗
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Fingers crossed. But I fear he has a few tricks up his sleeve…(k)
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Yes, definitely fingers crossed though that fear is not unfounded for sure.
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That’s just it, we let our egos get to our heads, and, not realized, that we are, on the way to, lose, BIG!
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I so hope your words come true!
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Punam, this is an emotionally charged poem. No one likes a bully and Putin is definitely a bully of the highest order. I do believe in Divine Retribution but God’s time table is not always to my liking. Still I’m patient. Perhaps Putin and Trump will both be felled in a single blow!
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I say amen to that, Val!
(I agree, god’s time table is terribly off!)
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Interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done.
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Thanks a lot!
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Excellent take Punam! It shows that you can tackle topics outside your comfort zone with flair.
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Aww! That’s a lovely compliment, Sadje. Thank you. ❤️
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My pleasure 💖
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What a very interesting take on the prompt! Sounds like things are not looking up for him!
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I hope that is true, Dwight! Thank you.
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Wow!!! Luv where this prompt took you.
Much💛love
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Thanks so much, Gillena! 💙
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Gah! This is the cycle of life. Love the mix of gore and wisdom!
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Thanks, Rosema.
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I just wish Karma paybacks were faster than they are.
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I absolutely agree, Reena!
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Would love to see him dealt many punches – but expect he has more dirty tricks up his sleeve.
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I am sure he does, Marion! It’s wishful thinking on my part for sure.
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Nothing wrong with wishing …you never know.🤞
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👍🏼
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Oh how I wish to see when Karma catches up with him and delivers lasting comeuppance. Alas, she is not also switch, and I fear he has much more to harshe meals to deliver before his just desserts arrive.
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I guess if we all manifest this wish, Karma may catch up with him sooner than expected.
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Sucker punched— yup, that’s what he’ll get.
Punam dear, this is genius. Realistic and entertaining at once. And that photo. 😂
Splendid, little sister. You hold back no punches. Well done. XoXo
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Selma, thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it.
Little sister…I love it! ❤️🤗
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I do hope you are right Punam! 🙏
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Keeping my fingers crossed, Ingrid! 🤞🏼
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AmazIngness, are you. Perfect write, Punam! ❤️
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Dear Jeff, thank you. ❤️
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It’s always my pleasure, dear friend. ❤️
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Scary times!
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Ain’t it so and the end is nowhere in sight.
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So so sad…
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brilliant write on the poem Punam and I’m rootin your right my friend. I’m all about it❣️❣️🙏🏼
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