Candy striped swirling patterns of memories
time travel incognito to the present
leaving sloppy wet imprints
on the arid soil of mind
softly glowing through the dirty window of age
as life transits towards the end.
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Exquisite writing, Punam! ❤
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Cheryl, thank you so much. Hope you are well and had a great weekend. ❤️
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Nicely done Punam💕
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Cindy, thank you so much! ❤️
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It’s always my pleasure ❣️❣️
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Great use of the prompts Punam. Thanks for joining in 😀😀
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Thanks, Brian and always a pleasure when I can respond. 😀
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Somedays life does feel like one big swirling kaleidoscope! Good thing those memories get imprinted!
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Indeed, Heather!
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Nicely done, Punam. Memories definitely swirl as we get older!
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They sure do, Merril. I am seeing my mom’s memories doing just that.
Thanks a lot.
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You’re very welcome, Punam.
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Forms transit, but life stands immovable
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I don’t really know what is immovable but sometimes everything is swirls and at others nothing seems to move.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.
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That’s a good rendering of memory. (K)
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Thanks a lot, Kerfe.
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Love this Punam. 👍🏼
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Thanks, aapa. ❤️
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You’re welcome my dear sister
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Lots of prompts (impressive) and vivid images!
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Thanks a lot, Val. ❤️
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A dizzying swirl of time! Your words match the image well ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. ❤️
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With that psychedelic effects that sends us spinning.
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Absolutely! Thanks always for taking time out to read and comment.
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Life is a swirling kaleidoscope. Awesome poem, Punam.
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Kamal, thanks so much. 💖
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Welcome dear Punam 💖
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Beautiful composition Punam ❤️
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Radhika, thank you! ❤️
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Some things (like optical illusions), give us the impression of moving without really moving at all. Still, we sit under the tree pondering.
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So we do….
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“So” might be another word for “Yes”. It seems a good fit. Maybe
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Yes.
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I especially like the sense of moving towards something. Lovely use of metaphors.
~Dora
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Thanks a lot, Dora.
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That is a great description of memories. They sometimes get twisted and distorted and foggy!
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You are absolutely right! Thanks, Dwight.
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Tiy are welcome!
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How fun, and sublime! Awesome write, Punam. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. ❤️
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