Trapped within the binary of a frangible dream
I ride to the skies on butterfly wings
guided by a stray, aglimmer moonbeam
the rainbow a divine ditty hums and sings
I ride to the skies on butterfly wings
bedazzled by the zillion glittering stars
the rainbow a divine ditty hums and sings
the zephyrs strum along on the guitars
bedazzled by the zillion glittering stars
floating on the cushiony, candyfloss clouds
the zephyrs strum along on the guitars
but before I can pluck a star, mist shrouds!
Floating on the cushiony, candyfloss clouds
guided by a stray, aglimmer moonbeam
before I can pluck a star, mist shrouds
I am trapped within the binary of a frangible dream.
Written for Sadje’s wdys, Eugi’s moonwashed weekly challange and David’s W3 for Aditi’s prompt.
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What an amazing poem Punam. Your beautifully created imagery takes us to a dream world, floating on candy floss clouds. Thanks a lot for joining in.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. 🥰
Always a pleasure. 🙏🏼
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You’re most welcome my dear
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I love this, Punam! 💕🙂
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Harmony, thanks a lot!😊❤️
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Three challenges in one. Good job!
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Brandon, thank you!
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Wonderful job with poetic form! Magical lines!
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Barbara, thanks ever so much!
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Wonderfully crafted, Punam! An amazing take on the prompts and the poetry form itself. Brava!
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Eugi, thanks a lot! Much appreciated.
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Most welcome, Punam.
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Excellent poem so well written Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Kamal, thanks so very much!.❤️
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You are always welcome dear Punam 💖
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Love this. I’m bedazzled 😊❤️
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Ah! Lesley, thank you! ❤️🙂
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Imagery, sublime! A gorgeous write, Punam. ❤️
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Jeff, you are very kind! Thanks so much. ❤️
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Wonderful Punam. Zephyrs and guitars–love it! (K)
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Thanks so much, Kerfe!
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Some beautiful, fantastical imagery here Punam! ✨
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! 😊❤️
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What a wonderful dream to write about! ❤
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Veera, thank you! ❤️
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Beautiful! This one is a sensorial smorgasbord!
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Val, I am delighted you think so! Thank you. ❤️
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I enjoyed the language of your poem and the subtle yet shimmering rhymes
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Thanks so much for reading.
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Stunning work on the Pantoum here, Punam! 💘 Wow! I love how the lines flow and cascade down smoothly especially; “Floating on the cushiony, candyfloss clouds guided by a stray, aglimmer moonbeam before I can pluck a star.” Sigh 🥰🥰
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Aww! Thanks so much, Sanaa! Coming from you it means a lot. 💖🥰❤️
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So beautifully written Punam. You have painted such a beautiful dream with words
❤
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Glad you enjoyed it, Aditi. Thank you and also for the very interesting challenge. ❤️
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I have received such interesting poems for this challenge. The pleasure is all mine ❣
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Oh my goodness! I am completely blown away by your poem, exquisite write!
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Helen, thanks ever so much!
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A lovely pantoum. Bravo!!!
Much💛love
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Gillena, much appreciated. Thank you. 💙
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beautiful, great job! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Sylvia. ❤️
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You’re welcome ❤
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A difficult form! This is a pleasure to read…JIM
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Thanks a lot, Jim.
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your larger than life vocabulary and alliteration really make it work out so well¬
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Larry, thank you kindly.
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So beautiful,dazzling, and rhythmic.
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Jude, thanks a lot, my friend.
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The fragility of our dreams, so sweetly captured Punam. This is truly lovely to read.
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Marion, thanks a lot!
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dreamy and a wonderful dance in poetry Punam💕
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Cindy, much appreciated. Thank you! 💖💖
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absolutely… my pleasure! 💖
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Well! It only took me 20 minutes to get to the bottom of the comments! They get longer and longer each time 😀 Secondly, I want what you’re having! I felt as if I’d walked into a Beatles trip here. Love all that crazy imagery, especially the line “the zephyrs strum along on the guitars.” ❤ 🙂
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Sunra, I think I was quite hungry when I wrote this…had missed my dinner! 😅
Beatles trip… that’s a huge compliment! Thanks ever so much, you beautiful soul. 💖💖
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YOu’re most welcome ❤
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I love how you captured that dreamy sensation of moving in circles.
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Yes, the form does make it seem as if one is moving in circles. Thanks so much.
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That last line is incandescent.
~Dora
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Dora, delighted you think so! Thank you.
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Love, love, love, LOVE THIS.
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David 🥰🙏🏼❤️
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Such beautiful stunning imagery, Punam! 💙
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Ah! Thanks so much, Merril. 💙
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You’re very welcome! 💙
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Punam,
I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Murisopsis, is now live:
❤
David
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Yippee!! Thanks, David. 😊
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Ah… frangible – a new word for me. Very fitting.
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Jules, thanks so much. 😊
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Frangible dream…oh Wow! Punam
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