
The scintilla of doubt
that wormed its way into your mind
if only it were aliferous!
alas! it has sowed a seed of suspicion
I see the crease of frown on your forehead
as you slip uneasily into dormiveglia
I hear the susurration of your brain
as it wrests with your heart
my defence is bare truth
which may sound unbelievable
but I can’t utter gilded lies.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Mish, has challenged us to use some uncommon words. You can read more about it here.
Also for Eugi’s moonwashed weekly challenge.
A masterful use of the prompts. Excellent poem Punam
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Thanks so much, dear Sadje.
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Youβre most welcome my dear sister
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Brilliant Punam, loved how you weaved the words into one coherent and clever poem. ππππππ
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Much appreciated, Ken! Thanks for your encouraging words. ππΌ
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You’re very welcome Punam! πππ
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Beautifully penned, and great use of the words! They sure do fit right in π
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Thanks a lot, Veera. ππΌπ
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Excellent weaving of words, Punam! Thank you for joining my prompt.
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Thanks a lot, Eugi and my pleasure.
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You crafted this so well, enjoyed! ππ
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Tricia, thanks a lot. π
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Welcome! β₯οΈπβ₯οΈπ
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Perhaps itβs curiosity. Thanks for the lesson
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Maybe..
Thanks for reading.
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Mistrust can be a tangled web indeed. I like the way the prompt words slipped into the theme of your poem, especially ” I hear the susurration of your brain as it wrests with your heart”
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Thanks a lot, Mish. A very interesting and creative prompt.
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You’ve described the feel of that illustration perfectly. (Kl
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I was lucky to find the illustration. Thanks, Kerfe.
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Punam, I love this one – creative and cerebral use of the words!
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Thanks a lot, Val.
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Seamless use of words, Ma’am. It flows effortlessly like a river. π
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Aishwarya, thanks so much, my dear. π
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That seed of suspicion is where it all starts. Truth is the best defence. Love this one Punam.
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I agree, truth is always the best defence. Thanks so much, Grace.
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An uncommon poem. π Iβm off get my dictionary! π
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Thanks a lot, Lesley. π My bad! I should have included the meanings.
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I enjoy looking unknown words up.
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Wonderful Punam. A very great topic to explore. Neatly expressed. Great use of the unfamiliar words!
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Thanks so much, Vignesh. We learn new things everyday.
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Ah yes…..the seed of doubt….the tiniest of doubts can ultimately grow in proportion to humongous.
Your last three lines are powerful.
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Thanks a lot, Lillian!
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i loved it and got the gist. I’m still googling the words… π€ππ π Great job Punam!
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My bad! I should have included the meanings! π€π
Thank you so much, Cindy. ππ
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Nahhhh .. teasing you. Good to learn at a click of our fingers. Welcome!
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as you slip uneasily into dormiveglia
I hear the susurration of your brain
(I love the imagery!)
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Thanks so much, Barbara.
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The transformational power of truth. Excellent! Love this one, Punam. β€οΈ
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Thanks so much, dear Jeff. β€οΈ
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Thereβs a line for the times, βMy defence is bare truth, which may sound unbelievable.β Great stuff.
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Thanks a lot, Sean.
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Well done! ππ
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Thanks a lot, dear. ππ
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You are so welcome π ππ
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….”gilded lies’.
I have found that truth is not always welcome.
Sometimes silence is the better option.
If only politcians could promote their own deeds and not slander those they run against. But what would we do without the gossip?
I think we would all be better off.
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These days truth is certainly not welcomed. We would surely be better off.
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Sometimes even when the truth is known – it is not trusted because of ignorance…
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Couldn’t agree more…
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