
Bare and naked it stands
brown, brittle bark
barren, leafless branches
your toxicity torched it
once vivacious now vanquished
once stately now withered
it waits forlornly to be axed
I feel guilty when I look at it
for I killed it too; unintentionally.
yet, I feel like a murderer
no different than you
No, I did not immerse your ashes as is the custom
I did not want to pollute the holy waters
I did not scatter your ashes on the ground
the thought of the earth being blighted
smote my heart
I did not disperse your ashes in the air
how could I sully further the already sullied
I thought I was being wise
when I buried your ashes deep
under the ground in a cemetery
but your venom seeped into the soil
this tree, a dying declaration
that evil cannot be interred with bones.
Written for David’s W3 and Eugi’s moonwashed weekly challange.
Chilling to think that some life forms cannot be extinguished by mere death. I’m sorry the tree paid the price 😦
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Indeed, Li! The evil that exists is truly terrifying. 😓
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Amazing language, and an excellent write, Punam. Awesome!
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❤️
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❤️🤗
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Thanks so much, Jeff. ❤️
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We are all, murderers, in the sense, that we often, take things for granted, without any thanks, we just, take things that, don’t belong to us, without, asking for permission first.
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Yes, that too.
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Oh, my, dear Punam! What an amazing piece and chilling right to the bone. Bravo!
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Thanks so much, Eugi!
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My pleasure! 💕
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Oh my! What a hard hitting poem Punam. Excellent.
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Thanks so much, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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Evil does seem to seep into the world beyond its source. Vividly told. (K)
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It does, I believe. Thanks, Kerfe.
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😮
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😓
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Love it. Every line is so sharp and powerful
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Thanks a lot, JYP. I am pleased you think so.
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Powerful words, Punam. I like that this can be read in multiple ways, but I agree with “chilling.”
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Thanks a lot, Merril. I was certainly aiming for that effect.
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You’re very welcome, Punam!
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Haunting. Frightening. This sounds like the preface to a horror novel. Must’ve been a nasty dude to kill my tree!!
Thank you! Hope you enjoyed the project!—SSW
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When I looked at the pic, all I could do was think of that tree and ehy it was like that while others were flourishing.
So I had to create a very nasty person.
I enjoyed the challenge, Steven, thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated.
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Oh my. This is scary. And that poor tree.
Xoxo as always.
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Poor tree, indeed Selma! Thanks so much.
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Profound and deep poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal.
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You are always welcome Punam 🙏🏼
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The alliteration at the beginning creates a wonderful image of the tree!
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Glad you enjoyed the alliteration. Much appreciated, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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Wow…. that’s… dark.
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I know…it went very dark. 🙁
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We all hold the light that creates and also destroys. 🥲
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So much truth in your words, Barbara. May we all focus on the light that creates. 🙏🏼
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Yes, and the dark light helps with that like the wound that creates the pearl.
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Beautifully said.
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Thank you! 🌹♥️💕
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whoa that evil being got the best of the poor tree! nicely done!
💖
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Such a powerful poem, Punam – electrifying!
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Hi, Punam ❤
I just wanna let you know that the W3 prompt for this week (hosted by the lovely Britta Benson) is now live:
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An Alternative Verse One
Unclothed and vulnerable it stands
No mask to draw attention
This is where I belong
Wanting to be as I want
Once blind and now healed
Once false and now true
There is no future now
There is no blame or fault
This too is life unseen
Control is an illusion
No different than you
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