
sitting in the cramped hostel dormitory
I measured your rain, that splashed
on my hand-washed laundry. Drenching it
in petrichor redolent with first crush
eating griddle hot kathi roll at the corner street stall
I inhaled your smoky, saporous smell
and that piquant, fiery taste of you
still lingers on my fickle tongue
the hole-in-the-wall used-books stores
the addas over endless chais*
nurtured my hesitant, timorous voice
giving it an audience that knew the art of listening
you spread your arms like an aging matriarch
enfolding my bewildered, unsure self
and in the midst of clutter, chaos and cacophony
I found I could stand on my feet
my buoyant thoughts often meander
along the bends of the river Hooghly
Calcutta, your captivating ways often have me
loitering in the bylanes of the yester years.
Written for Britta’s prompt on David’s W3 and Moon washed weekly challange.
*tea
Exquisite Punam! Your use of vocabulary outstanding!! 😊
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Ami, thanks so much! 😊❤️
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You are a natural and sensitive wordsmith Punam. Calcutta has never been explained to me. I now have a some understanding of your crazy city.
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It is not easy to fall in love with Calcutta at first sight. It grows on you gradually and even when you stop living there, you always carry it within you. At least that’s been my experience. Thanks kindly for your appreciation, Sean.
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Beautiful poetry Punam. Your love for Calcutta is showing through.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. It is a beautiful place.
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I wish I can see it one day too
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Inshallah!
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👍🏼😍Inshaa’Allah
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A lovely ode to Calcutta, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Smitha! I could have gone on and on.
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Punam, I have never been to Cal but your poem kind of put in words how I imagine it to be.
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I am sure you will love it, whenever you visit. ❤️
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You’ve painted a vivid and evocative picture of your city. Wonderfully done Punam.
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Thanks so much, Miriam! Delighted you enjoyed it.
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Beautiful poem, ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Aishwarya. 🙂
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Sublime. Calcutta Calling. Love it. 👏
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Selma, thank you! 🙏🏼
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This is just beautiful. I love how you brought the city to life.
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Thanks a lot, Nitin. Ever been there?
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You’re welcome and sadly no. I’ve had friends and college classmates from there, but I never did visit. Perhaps one day in the future.
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My reminiscence is of course coloured with nostalgia but it is surely worth one visit. Hope whenever you visit, you will like it.
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ooh! Sounds like a love letter to memories
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I.J, a love letter to not just memories but to Calcutta too!
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So evocative, Punam – I felt like I was there!
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Ah! Thanks so much, Ingrid. 🙏🏼
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https://allabouteverything4life.wordpress.com/2022/08/11/the-supermoon/Sent from my Galaxy
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All the senses evoked. Great atmosphere. (K)
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Thanks a lot, Kerfe. Indian cities usually engage all the senses.
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What a beautiful piece with such visuals through your words that evoked such emotion and awe Punam!💕
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Cindy, I am glad my words could do that! Thanks so much. 💖💖
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it’s a gift.. welcome! 💖💖
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Simply beautiful. Your words evoked all the senses.
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Thanks a lot, Heather. ❤️
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You’re welcome.
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Splendid poem, Punam 💖
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Greatly appreciated, Kamal. 💖🙏🏼
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You are always welcome dear Punam 💖
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Your love for Calcutta is vividly expressed, Punam. You made the city come alive! Beautifully penned.
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Thanks so much, Eugi! ❤️
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My pleasure, Punam!
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Amazing language and imagery, evoking wonderful feelings, Punam. Gorgeous! ❤️
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Thanks for your appreciation, Jeff! ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam! Always. ❤️
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Your imagery is to die for, Punam… You really bring me there with your words.
Ya know, I’m reading a novel about Bombay now (not Calcutta, I know, I know) – but it’s so eye-opening! Have you read “Shantaram”? I highly recommend it 😀
❤
David
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David, thank you! ❤️❤️
Oh, yes! I have read “Shantaram”! Isn’t it amazing! 😀 You must visit India. You will enjoy all the sights and sounds.
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I felt transported to a magical place!
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Aww! Thanks so much, Irene!
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Punam, this is brilliant. Not only because you use one of my favourite words, ‘petrichor’, but ‘sitting in the cramped hostel dormitory I measured your rain’ got me hooked and your poem never let me go. I live in Scotland. Still, I feel a little closer to Calcutta, after reading your poem. I have chosen you to be next week’s Poet of the Week.
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Britta, thank you so much! I am delighted that I could give you a glimpse of my beloved city. It is not as beautiful as Scotland but it grows on you. I am humbled that you have chosen me to be the Poet of the Week. Much appreciated.
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Punam,
Britta has chosen this poem about Calcutta to be our “poem of the week” for W3! Hooray ☺
Could you please send me one or two guidelines for this week’s prompt in the next day or so?
You should feel free to get creative:
-a particular poetic device
-a particular form of poetry
-a particular word or phrase
-a particular graphic (for an ekphrastic poem)
-a particular length
-etc., etc., etc…
Much love 💞
David
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David, I am humbled. 🙏🏼😊
Will mail you by tonight.
Thank you. ❤️
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Stunning piece hon 👏👏❤️❤️❤️
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Aww! Thanks, sweetheart. ❤️❤️🙏🏼
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My pleasure hon 🌺🌸🌹
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That makes me like Calcutta even without having visited it 🙂 Wonderfully written as always!
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How nice of you to say that, Vignesh! Thank you. 😊
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Just saw Kolkata glowing in the light.. Can relate to all that you have written and so loved every word all the more. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Goutam. I had a feeling this would resonate with you. 😊🙏🏼
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How rich and amazing this poem is! I feel and hear and smell the sights that arise in this writing. ❤
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I am delighted that all your senses could enjoy this poem. Thanks, Jaya. ❤️
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What a wonderful piece about Calcutta. My dad lived there and thereabouts for most of his life. He often tells me of his fond memories. I visited the city during Christmas holidays once, when I was a child. It was very festive, compared to other places in India. There was this one particular road that was very elaborately decorated.
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Tanmay, do forgive for the late reply. Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. That must have been the Park Street. It still is magical during Christmas.
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