You were such a romantic
we were known as the duo dynamic
my love made you ecstatic
but lately you have been erratic
your ardour has become static
but today ain’t you being dramatic
declaring that I am not your type! How utterly pathetic!
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, De, says: I want you to play with some form of the word type in your piece: typing, typed, typewriter, typography, typist.Archetypal.
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The pox (monkey) on bored lovers, who probably never were lovers at all. Get back out there. Your Lothario awaits.
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Ha! You are so right, Glenn.
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If we all got more erotic, we wouldn’t be so neurotic!
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Lol Colleen, absolutely!
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What starts out so dramatic ends up the equivalent of yesterday’s relics in an attic
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Ha! You are so right, Larry!
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The capriciousness of love is like biting down on a rotten grape. Narcissists do the love bomb and then start the punishment phase. Kick the punk to the curb!
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And there he should stay!
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So many fun words here! Their loss, that’s for sure!
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For sure! Thanks, De. 🙂
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nicely done utterly pathetic.. 💖😂
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Cindy…😂😂💖
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💖😂😂🤗
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How very prophetic and not at all apathetic my frenetic friend! 😊
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Ha, Ami! 😀
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put a smile on my face. this piece makes you raise your eyebrows about where the problem lies.
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So glad it did, Sean! Being frivolous helps lighten the mood.
Yes, one does wonder about the underlying problem.
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Yeah, that is usually, how we all get bored with the love, the one we are, with, eventually, because everything becomes, too ordinary, aftwr that freshness wears, off…
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Boredom can be the bane of any relationship.
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Boo….better off without him! 😏
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Boo…indeed, Christine! 😉
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LOL 🤣
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your ardour has become static
Great play of words in this poem!
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Thanks a lot, Ain.
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Great word play and rhyme scheme.
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Arcadia, thanks a lot.
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Delightful monorhyme! The scene plays out in detail and I fill in the blanks.
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The blanks can be filled by the reader to their liking. Glad you enjoyed the monorhyme, Val!
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Wonderful word play.
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Thanks, Sadje!
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Always a pleasure my dear friend
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This made me smile, Punam. (K)
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Delighted that it did, Kerfe.
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Nice one. Im smiling 😊
Much💖love
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So happy that you are, Gillena. 💙
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I laughed out loud. A very humorous, love poem. I love the voice of the narrator too. And the picture fits perfectly.
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I am so happy that you laughed out loud, Nitin. Wanted to have some fun.
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Clever, and made me smile 🙂
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I am happy it did, Jane. 🙂
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🙂
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Brilliant and fun! Nice one, Punam 💕🙂
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Harmony, so glad you enjoyed it. ❤️🙂
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Great word play. This made me smile.
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Delighted that it made you smile, Eugi! 😊
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😉
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Fun poem–and farewell to that jerk! 🙂
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Thanks, Merril. Farewell, indeed. 🙂
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Nice and cute poem Punam
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Thanks a lot, Kamal.
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Welcome dear Punam 💖
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Lol! I’ve never read a funny breakup poem before. Love your lightheartedness in this.
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Tanmay, so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you.
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This made me smile as well🙂, some of the responses too. His loss.
Pat
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Pat, I am delighted that it made you smile. 🙂
Yes, the responses have been equally smile worthy.
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I love a poem with attitude and this one has it. The excuse of “not my type” is the lamest of all.
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I agree, that is the lamest but used so commonly!
Thanks a lot, Mish.
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Better off without the fickle fellow! Smiles.
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So happy that it made you smile, Marion!
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So funny. A poem worthy of a break up.
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Hehe, Tracy! Not all breakups end in tears.
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That’s your next poem, Punam. 😉
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Incidentally the one I posted early this morning also deals with break up! 😅
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He’s not saying it but he’s found a new young chick to love.
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Who cares, Jim! 😉 He obviously doesn’t have the guts to admit the truth.
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Ah! That’s awesomeness in words, Punam. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. ❤️
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The last line made me smile – pathetic is right!
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Damn straight!
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👍🏼❤️
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😀❤️
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Wonderful Wordplay and very well written! The image made me giggle tho!😂😊
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Thank you and so happy that it made you giggle. 😀😀
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