
Dear brothers, I guess, like always, I will have to make the first move
I forgave mom on her deathbed for always coddling and favouring you two
I guess ’tis time to move on and forgive you two too!
Mind you, what you did was unforgivable and despicable
but over the years life has dealt unfair hand after unfair hand
you miserable dogs, I relent, I’ll no more grandstand!
Of late, my mind has been traversing the untrodden alleys of past
strangely, those happy, carefree childhood memories
are undimmed and undiminished by time’s vagaries
Dear brothers, I am sending you rakhi** after all these years
may you be bestowed with compassion, sensitivity and longevity
I couldn’t let go of this occasion to bless you with my magnanimity!
Written for Sadje’s wdys.
*Rakshabandhan will be celebrated on 11th August.
**Rakhi – sacred threads to be tied on the wrist.
So like a sibling to rub it in before being magnanimous and forgiving. Love this Punam. Thanks for joining in
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Indeed! Thanks a lot, Sadje.
Always a pleasure. ❤️
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You’re most welcome
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Awe a mural from Penang, Malaysia
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Sadje shared the pic.
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Awe, thats nice
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Will it always be so that boy children are preferred? But to love and bless our brothers is right and good. (K)
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In India it won’t change anytime soon, Kerfe. To forgive is to bless. Thanks, Kerfe.
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My parents definitely wanted boys, as did their parents. Me–I was glad for two girls.
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Things are changing gradually.
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Ha ha, that was funny and sweet 🙂 Good one Punam 🙂
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So glad you enjoyed it, Vignesh! Thank you.😊
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Lols. Funny and so relatable, Punam 💕🙂
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I am delighted you found it so, Harmony! Thank you. ❤️😊
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Forgiveness brings us inner peace 🙏❤️
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I agree, Ingrid, it does. 🙏🏼❤️
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This narrative poem really comes to life. I can hear the tone of the sister’s voice…a little condescending! Thanks for the link, I learned something new today.
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Yup, condescending it is! Thanks a lot, Heather and my pleasure.
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Nice and apt poem for Rakshabandhan Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Thanks so much, Kamal. 🙏🏼❤️
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Welcome dear Punam.
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So true to life! Delightful piece, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Eugi! 😊
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I’m struck by the boy in the back and his face. A little sibling torture maybe?
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Can’t rule that out. Older ones love to bully.
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Such a nice take on the poem for Rakshabandhan Punam! 💖
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Thanks a lot, Cindy. 💖
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i don’t know of the celebration, but recognise the sentiment. Sibling rivalries can so dominate our psyche.
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The sentiment remains the same everywhere, Sean, notwithstanding the celebration.
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Very heartfelt and moving, Punam. I just popped over to say hello, and wish you well💙
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Hello, Leyde. So good to see you. So nice of you to drop in.
I am glad you found it moving. 💙
I do hope it is cooler over there now.
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A bit cooler–and we have hope of Rain!! Hurray!😊 Take care of YOU–Blessings!
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Great! Thanks for your blessings and take care. 😊
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💖💖💖
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Wonderful depiction of how we should be as adults and we really want to be – even though we are adults. Thank you for sharing Punam! ☺️
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Thanks so much for your insightful words, Ami. 😊❤️
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You are most welcome P! 😊
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As always the blessing of forgiveness washes over the forgiven but doubly so for the forgiver. Wonderful vignette of sibling rivalry and reconciliation!
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I couldn’t agree more, Val. Forgiving is so liberating. Thanks a bunch.
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Punam, lovely take. I liked the way you have woven Raksha Bandhan into the poem. The festival is meant to forgive and forget, so the bond is stronger.
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You are absolutely right, Usha, that is the spirit of the festival. The pic reminded me of my brother and cousin, thus I wove in Rakshabandhan.
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Lovely.
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😊
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To forgive is liberating. Such an endearing tale with so many hues of emotions woven around it Punam. Well done!
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Thanks so much, Radhika. It sure is liberating. ❤️
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Beautiful, Punam! And very relatable ❤ 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Sunra. ❤️ Sibling fights are common, na!
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Indeed, Punam! ❤️ You’re welcome 😊
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I remember my father and my uncle when they were grandparents still competing for their mother’s favor! Sibling rivalry dies hard! Your poem is delicious, Punam! Perfectly captures that idea!
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Oh Cheryl, that is so true! Thanks for sharing about your father and uncle. Much appreciated. ❤️
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Awww, so beautiful and sweet.
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