we took a trip to the edge of understanding
in a bid to discover each other
and under the resplendent starry skies
tried to solve the eternal mystery
guided by the luminous moonbeams,
he was immersed in inhabiting my heart
in the enigmatic umbra,
I was lost in the maze of his mind.
Sharing at dVerse OLN and moonwashed weekly challange.
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Wow! I am still swooning over your first line! Brilliant writing, Punam!
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Aww! Thanks a lot, Eugi. ❤️
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“he was immersed in inhabiting my heart
in the enigmatic umbra,
I was lost in the maze of his mind”
That is so good.
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Thanks so much, Shawna!
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Beautiful poem. I admire the desire and action for understanding.
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Thanks so much, Grace.
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ahh the perfect romance, a fit bod is ok but his mind is the ultimate seducer
😉
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You got it, sis. 😉
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And now I finally come and visit you, Punam! It has been too long, my dear 🙂
This verse is absolutely gorgeous from start to finish. Those beautiful first two lines and the thread of romance throughout until the end. Just love it ❤
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Sunra, you made my day with your visit and words of appreciation! Thanks so much, dear. ❤️
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Any time, chick! 🙂 ❤
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Wow this is great! There are things we can only see when they are reflected by the heart of Love
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So true! Thank you so much.
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Beautifully crafted poem. sigh
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Thanks a lot.
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So sensual. This is a mood
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Glad you like it, JYP.
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So beautiful Punam.
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Thanks so much, Sadje.
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You’re always welcome my dear
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The edge of understanding…I picture it like ocean waves, ebbing and flowing. (K)
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I did have that in mind, Kerfe.
Hope you had a good break.
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Yes it was good, thanks. Still trying to get reoriented–transitions are hard for me.
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Transitions are hard for most of us. You are welcome.
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A very beautiful, tender poem about love and connection, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Nitin.
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This is brilliant.. awesome write Punam 💕
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Kirti, thank you so much. ❤️
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You’re most welcome ❣️
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The “edge of understanding” ….I could visualize this and the poem really speaks concisely to the differences in communication and the goal of connection.
Welcome again to the dVerse team, Puman. 🙂
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Much appreciated your insight, Mish.
Thank you so much, I am looking forward to it. 🙂
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So lovely to read Punam. Very romantic. Moon and stars always add a bit more romance quotient 🙂
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I agree, Vignesh, they do. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Beautiful poem and beautifully crafted. I love that first line–a wonderful hook. I saw moonlit seas. 💙
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How wonderful you see moonlit seas. Thanks so much, Merril. 💙
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You’re very welcome, Punam! 💙
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I love this description of getting to know a lover!! Wow!
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I like your ‘wow’, Val! Thank you!
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So lovely, Punam! 💕🙂
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Glad you liked it, Harmony. ❤️🙂
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I agree with the others, that first line is a powerful draw!
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So appreciate it, Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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we took a trip to the edge of understanding”
Very interesting start line
Much💚love
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Thanks a lot, Gillena. 💙
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great imagery and word use! 💖👏
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Thanks a lot, Cindy. 💖
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Welcome Punam! 💖
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mutual exploration is delicious and satisfying, and you capture the process well here
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So it, Li! Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome, Punam!
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Wonderful words, dear Punam. A lovely write! ❤️
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Jeff, so nice of you! Thanks a lot. ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam. Always! ❤️
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“guided by the luminous moonbeams,
he was immersed in inhabiting my heart
in the enigmatic umbra”
These lines are lovely 🙂
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Veera, thanks so much. 😊
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I enjoyed the parallels between the mysteries of love and the mysteries of the stars here, Punam! 🌝 ⭐️
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. 😊
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So much to explore here!! “Tripping” sums it up perfectly, this resonates! 💫
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