
Stories have no feet
yet travel
on wind or rain, through words and deeds
complete or incomplete
constantly in motion; like women
like trees; growing, branching
replicating over time
crossing man-made boundaries
finding familiar ground of love and greed
hate and destruction
uniting despite divisions
All stories are the same
and yet told differently
carrying seeds of the past
in the embryo lies the future
moving along jagged coastlines
meandering with rivers
soft as snowflake
like labyrinthine mysteries
unfolding symmetries
unknown to our minds.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Lisa, says: Now that I have hopefully acquainted you with the concept and examples of fractals and connected them to poetry by subject and application, your challenge, if you choose to accept it, is:
1) Use any of the definitions, examples, images, or application of fractals to inspire you to write whatever strikes your fancy.
OR
2) Think about something/someone in your world that you have, up to this point, only given a superficial consideration of and decide to look a little closer at it/them. Use what you discover as fodder for a poem.
Stories are fractals. Read more about it here.
I really loved the message in your writing
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Glad you enjoyed it, Christine. Thank you.
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Loved your opening lines. Enjoyed the comparisons in your poem, Ma’am. 🙂
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Aishwarya, thanks for your appreciation. 😊
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I love this concept! Stories are definitely fractals of a greater whole! Very well done!
Dwight
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Dwight, your comment really made me happy. Thank you!
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Wonderful! You are very welcome!
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Love this poem. And the lines about stories traveling though they don’t have feet. Awesome.
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Delighted that you liked the opening lines. Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome my dear sister
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Thank god for that.
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Yes.
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So profound and beautiful! A great read
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Much appreciated, Simone. Thank you.
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Pleasure 🙂
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True every story is different no two stories are the same. Lovely poem
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Thanks, dear Kamal.
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Welcome dear Punam 💖
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Loved every thing about this beautifully expressed poem Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Cindy. Much appreciated. 💖🙏🏼💖
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You’re so welcome .. always Punam! 💖
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Love the flow and expression in this fantastic poem! ❤
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Jaya, thanks a lot. ❤️
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Punam! Your fractal poem was worth the wait. I love how you opened each stanza and then did an exposition on each. It truly is stunning in its depth and insight.
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Li, thank you so much! I mulled over it for the longest time. I am glad that it paid off. I found an amazing article about stories being fractals and have added to my post. You may enjoy it. ❤️
That nightcap was amazing…I slept deeply. 🙂
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You’re most welcome, Punam. I will check out the article! Happy about the nightcap 🙂
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🙂
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p.s. I just read the article you linked. I like how he explained it. Makes total sense.
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Thanks for reading, Li. When I wrote about stories, I believed they are fractals but I was not too sure. So I checked and checked and like you said, this article did make sense. 🙂
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You’re welcome and thanks for sharing it 🙂
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My pleasure.
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Stories are always present, just as nature, they are divine! Love to see a good one take shape, myself! 👏👏💓
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Thanks a lot, Tricia. Glad you enjoyed it. 💖🙏🏼
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Love your poem. This is such a unique take on the prompt. Specially admire the movements of story telling:
carrying seeds of the past
in the embryo lies the future
moving along jagged coastlines
meandering with rivers
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Thanks so much, Grace. It was a challenging prompt.
I am glad you enjoyed these lines.
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Factual or not, this poem is amazing Punam!! I love it and the story that is born, grows and changes but never dies – just transforms!! Wow!
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Val, I am delighted that you enjoyed it. Your “wow” means a lot. ❤️
I have linked a post about stories being fractals. You may enjoy it.
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This is such a good poem. Captures how a story travels through time and its agelessness. I loved its flow. It reads like a piece of great intensity.
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Nitin, thanks a lot. Stories will always be there, even when we are not.
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Jagged river coastline yet the water so soft reminds me of a grizzled man and how soft his love is to his child.
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I am glad it did that, Jim.
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Thank you, Christine ✨😌🍀🍃✨
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Beautifully written, Punam. Stories are all that. I especially liked the final lines of your poem.
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Thanks a lot, Merril. 💙
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You’re very welcome!
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Ah! the freedom of writing …. enjoyed , eco
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Thanks a lot, eco.
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Stunning, dear Punam. I’m always inspired by your words. Gorgeous! ❤️
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Jeff, thanks so much! Deeply appreciated. ❤️
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You’re welcome, dear Punam! Always. ❤️
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Luv your imaging of stories as fractals.
Thanks for dropping by to read mine.
Much💚love
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Gillena, thanks so much and always a pleasure. 💙
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