
Charlatan Luna, shining coquettishly in borrowed finery
Takes undue advantage of nature binding us in a binary
My brightness, my albatross
Her luminosity, also my cross
Paeans sung in secondary’s praise; I rue being the primary.
Ami, chose me as Poet of the week for David’s W3, for my poem Slavery.
This limerick is in response to my own challenge.
Excellent limerick Punam. ππΌππΌππΌ
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. ππΌβ€οΈ
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Youβre most welcome
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Punam! This one is so good! I love the choice of words (I haven’t seen coquettishly used lately and it reminds me that I like that word)!!
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Val, I like that word too! I am delighted that you enjoyed the limerick.
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Fantastic!
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Thanks a lot, Selma. xoxo
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Wonderful limerick Punam.
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Thanks so much, Kamal.
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You are always welcome Punam πππ
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Excellent, Punam. The language is masterful. β€οΈ
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Dear Jeff, thank you! β€οΈ
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Most welcome, dear Punam. Always! β€οΈ
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wow the limerick is wonderful!
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Thanks a lot, Kunjal.
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Fabulous.
I’ve got a mag to recommend dear, s new one run by a fellow blogger/writer, a very nice person btw, and not a demanding editor at all. It’s called The dark winter literary magazine. She’s Suzanne. Make sure u submit.
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Thanks, Bo.
I checked out the mag. Am writing something…will submit soon. Thanks for recommending.
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You’re so welcome.
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I like the threads you used to connect them. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe.
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Haunting words, Punam π
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Thanks, Ingrid.
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Wonderfully written, PunamππΌπ
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Thanks a lot, Deeksha. ππΌπ
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Outstanding piece, Punam! Bravo!
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Thanks so much, Eugi.
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My pleasure, Punam!
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Wonderful limerick and a science lesson too! β€ Love it, Punam!
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Cheryl, thank you so much! β€οΈ
Please bear with me, I am extremely late in responding.
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Stunning choice of words
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Thanks a lot, Sonia.
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