Mesmerizing eyes
establish sole sovereign rights
heart a willing slave.
Written for David’s W3. This week’s winner Ami asked us to use “sovereign” and “rights” in our verse.
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Spot-on!
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Thank you!
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Deadly!!!
I am speechless
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Aw shucks!
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truly touching Punam ..
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Thanks, Ivor.
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Lovely! The eyes are very expressive too.
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Thanks, Sadje. That’s a lovely pic.
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My pleasure, always
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They do look hypnotic…
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They certainly do.
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Beautiful ❤✨🍃
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Thanks, Komal.
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Beautiful. The eyes are the window to the soul.
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So they are, Miriam. Thank you.
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A one sided love always ends badly! Even if the enslaved willingly accepts that role…The games people play! A thought provoking poem Punam!
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I agree, Val. Thank you.
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👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼❤😘💕💕💕…
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💖❤️🥰🙏🏼😊
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Superb and expressive eyes. Lovely, Punam.
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Thanks, Kamal.
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Welcome Punam 💖
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Wow! Beautifully expressed, Punam😄
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Thanks, Deeksha.
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mmmm…. a “willing” slave – I like that, Punam!
❤
David
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Glad you like it, David. 😀❤️
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Punam, Your very well expressed understanding of a humans basic need to belong and serve his/her fellow human being/culture/tribe/family/love voluntarily is remarkable. Slavery and all its negative connotations are wiped away with the word willing and/or consensual. Extraordinary piece P. 😊
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Thanks so much, dear Ami for such a beautiful comment. That’s exactly what I was trying to convey. Thank you so much for the honour too. ❤️😊
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You are very welcome my talented friend. 😉
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Punam,
Ami has selected this poem as this week’s W3 “poem of the week”! Mazal tov!
Could you please come up with one or two guidelines (poetic form, word count, etc., etc.) and send them to me by email in the next day or so?
Thank you!
David
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I hope they can live happily ever after
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I hope so too!
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Powerful to the point and heartfelt Punam! 💖👏
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Thanks a lot, Cindy. ❤️💖
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Always 💖💖💖
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Amazing verse, Punam. Deep and powerful. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Jeff. ❤️
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Most welcome, Punam. ❤️ Always.
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hi, Punam ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by Steven S. Wallace, is now live:
Have a wonderful day,
David
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