
I try to read the clouds
the angry, roiling, dark ones
obscuring the opalescence of the skies
no answer forthcoming!
my fossilized pain spills over
dangling over the edge
aghast and immobilised I watch
as it coalesces and drops in a puddle.
purged but now a hollow, scorched husk
I dither, unprepared to face the empty chaos
then rain starts to fall gently
the crevices slowly begin to fill.
Written for Sadje’s wdys and Eugi’s weekly prompt.
Your poem is so incredibly touching Punam. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks so much, Sadje. Always a pleasure to join in.
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You’re always welcome my dear sister
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🙏🏼❤️
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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A poignant piece, so well penned Punam ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Radhika. ❤️
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The turmoil inside as reflected by the outside world– both are captured well. (K)
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Kerfe, thank you.
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A world in turmoil awaiting to be cleansed by the rain. Beautifully written piece, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Eugi. ❤️
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Punam you have perfectly captured the spilling of tears that are obscured and joined by the rain – perhaps the angels weep as well….
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Thanks so much, Val. Perhaps they do…
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Oh my goodness this is a wonderfully captured piece that sums up so much and perfect for the prompt too! 💖
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Thanks so much, Cindy. Delighted that you think so. 💖🙏🏼
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Your work is always extraordinary.,. you’re most welcome! 💖
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🙏🏼💖💖
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Beautiful and relatable feelings, Punam! Love this😍
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I am glad it resonated, Deeksha. Thank you. ❤️
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Nicely written and reading it when raining outside here added depth to the words!
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Thank you.
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There is always that pot of gold waiting at the end of the rainbow.
Love the vivid imageries and the last line is hopeful, infusing a fresh lease of life.
Have a fun, rainy week ahead dear Punam. ❤
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Thanks so much, Natasha!
And surprisingly, it continues to rain. 😊❤️
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Gorgeous Punam. I love this! ❤️☺️
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Thanks a lot, Christine. 😊❤️
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Poignant and deep poem, Punam. Too good.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal.
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Welcome Punam 🙏🏼
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The comparison is very beautiful, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks, Aishwarya.
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Amazing language, and the depth of feelings are so rich and visceral, they resonate with me. Gorgeous write, Punam. ❤️
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I am glad it resonated, Jeff. Thanks muchly. ❤️
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It’s always my pleasure, Puanam. Always. ❤️
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A very moving poem.
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Thank you.
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