
A smattering of wispy, delicate clouds
hide the brooding blood moon
light dims, air stills
comets whizz past softly
lest they step on the nebula cart
wheel gently past all the stars
waiting for the clouds to part
in awe watches the earth
quake in anticipation all earthlings
perfectly aligned moon, earth and sun
burn all the books proclaiming
sun has been swallowed by the beasts
if the end of the world seems nigh any day
time to go back to history books.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Lillian says: I want you to choose at least one compound word from the list below to use in your poem. You may choose to use more.
AND
FOR EACH COMPOUND WORD YOU DO USE, I want you to take apart the compound word within your poem. You can do that by a) putting the first half of the compound word at the end of a line and the second half of the compound word immediately at the beginning of the next line OR b) by separating the two halves of the compound word with punctuation. You MUST separate the two root words that make up the compound word.
You may NOT put additional words between the two root words, and you may NOT add a letter to either of the root words.
In other words, the root words must be used exactly as they appear in the compound word!
Hereβs the list you can choose from:
crosswalk
handshake
armpit
underestimate
goodnight
honeydew
earthquake
cartwheel
moonlight
showoff
waterproof
moonwalk
nightlight
midnight
hotdog
daytime
starfish
sunburn
(I used words in bold italics.)
such a great job Punam and congrats on 2,000 followers! πππππ well done!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Oh, really! π³ WP does not even inform!! π
A celebratory post is in order then! πππ₯
Thanks a lot, Cindy!! ππ
LikeLiked by 2 people
hahaahh Yes it is.. Cheer to that and happy celebration!!! I’m cheering with you even though I can’t find my glasses or my emojis and you know how much that kills me.. lol
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks once again!
Here, take my glasses π₯and πβ€οΈπππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh it’s always a pleasure… thanks π³ that’s πI needed those. ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
ππ·ππ₯°
LikeLiked by 1 person
π§π€ππ₯Έ I found these glasses π
LikeLiked by 1 person
ππππ I don’t think you need anymore pairs now!
LikeLiked by 1 person
πππ π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh, you have indeed compounded me! LOVING that last stanza!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks a lot, Lillian! Loved the prompt.
LikeLiked by 1 person
ooh masterful use of those compound words sis, kudos!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, sis.
How are you? How are things??
LikeLiked by 1 person
excellent thanks … think I’ve quit WP, just reading a bit π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome.
That’s sad….I am losing one by one the friends I made on WP.
LikeLiked by 1 person
happens when they keep mucking us around … we can keep in contact via email, I’ll always be here π
LikeLiked by 1 person
WP troubling you again? π³
We do have the email, of course.
LikeLiked by 1 person
not really … I was always going to stop π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I loved the title, the picture and what great skill of weaving those words in to this beautiful poem!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks a lot, Pragalbha! I am so glad you enjoyed it, it did take time to come together.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are very welcome dear Punam π
LikeLiked by 2 people
I loved the way you broke up the words, especially cart and wheel. And of course the moon! (K)
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks a lot, Kerfe.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! Your poem is a Bravo moment from the title to the end. Thank you for including my prompt in your masterpiece. π
LikeLiked by 3 people
Ah, Eugi! Thanks so much for your appreciation.π
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure, indeed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thatβs epic my dearest Punam ππππ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Gab, thank you so much!
I am touched despite your busy schedule, you find time to drop in! ππ·β€οΈππΌ
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure hon. Your poem is superb. Sending lots of love.
xoxo
LikeLiked by 1 person
Xoxo
LikeLike
I could see the the images of the first verse, so well described. I viewed the blood moon the other night waiting patiently for the clouds to disperse. A creative way to split cart wheel from one verse to the next. An enjoyable read.
LikeLiked by 2 people
The blood moon was a sight to watch, isn’t it! We both wrote about it. Thanks a lot, True, so glad you enjoyed it.
LikeLike
Excellent take Punam. Love the poem.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks so much, dear Sadje.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Youβre always welcome my dear sister
LikeLiked by 2 people
A wonderful compilation, PunamππΌπ€©
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks so much, Deeksha. πβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Those poetry prompts seem awfully difficult to me, Punam. You’ve done a brilliant job. I am particularly entranced by that first stanza and the comets whizzing past the nebula cart.
LikeLiked by 2 people
I agree, Tracy, they seem awfully difficult but actually aren’t! They do share an example or two which makes it easier.
I think sleeplessness at night is helping me write better poetry! π
Thanks so much, Tracy, truly appreciated. β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome, Punam.
LikeLiked by 2 people
A reassuring and uplifting poem, Punam! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Ingrid! β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovley, Punam ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Harmony. β€οΈπ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great work. Great words
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, dear, Selma. β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your words took me on a lovely journey!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is gorgeously encapsulated, Punam π Wow! ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Sanaa! πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
LikeLike
A heavenly sight to see that blood moon and many sights to capture it. I could not see it myself, hiding behind clouds. Still, it is just the same moon.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, indeed…it is just the same yet different.
LikeLike
I enjoyed the celestial theme and clever ways you incorporated the compound words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Mish.
LikeLike
A magical dance, dear Punam. β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Jeff! β€οΈ
LikeLike
The last stanza is the best.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Reena.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Ken.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Really a lovely, deft job with the challenge, and a fine poem to show for it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Joy, thank you so much.
LikeLike
Life is compoundingly challenging! π Yes, I just made up the word but whatever, fab poem. You met and exceeded the challenge! And yes, history books need to be re-read by everyone!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Pam. It is always wonderful to make up words to convey what we mean. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful and profound poem, Punam. Loved it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Kamal. πππΌ
LikeLike
Welcome dear Punam ππΌπ
LikeLiked by 1 person
The blood moon eclipse clearly captured. I love the notes of proclamation and wondrous alert. This is a lovely piece.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, my friend.
LikeLike
You’re very much welcome β€
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very intriguing
LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad you think so.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your post is like a blessing for us from God…. Loved it πππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww! Such a lovely compliment. Thanks so much. π
LikeLike
You deserve it bro…. ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just wanted to remind you that you rock! π€
LikeLike
Aww! Thanks so much. π€β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person