These parched eyes do crave
the cooling dew drops of dreams
but stay sleep deprived
the night is sleepless
and the morn is still sleeping
the lone moon loiters
my eyes dodge sly sleep
I fill the space betwixt lids
with your loving thoughts
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Sarah, says: give me your sleepy poems! Your poems of rest and relaxation, of drifting off into the golden haze of slumber! Your spiky poems of lying awake while your lover snores beside you! Your forty winks on a sunny afternoon!
A set of three haiku on elusive sleep.
When you cannot sleep it’s good to fill the wakendness with lovely thoughts
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Absolutely…the best thing to do.
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Lovely haiku – and they work really well as a sequence. I particularly like that loitering moon.
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Thanks a lot, Sarah. It was a wonderful prompt.
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What an ending!
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Thanks, Bo.
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I particularly like the last one. A good thing to think about! 💙
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Thanks, Merril. The best…😊💙
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You’re welcome!💙
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Oh my…haiku….so well done, so literary, really nicely done Punam…
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Thanks a lot, Ain. Couldn’t sleep…so tried to put time to better use.
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Ain, I am unable to leave a comment on your post.
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Ditto to Punam, could not comment on your poem. Devastatingly sad one 😦
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Li, when you visit his post just scroll the screen up. You will see the same post. Commenting is possible on that.
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Oh ok, thank you!
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👍🏼
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Or press home in the left hand corner.
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Your first one really captured my attention. I remember reading that we need sleep to stay alive, which is enough to give anyone insomnia. One of my best tricks for sound sleep is to get so tired that I pretty much fall unconscious as soon as I hit the bed.
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Thanks, Li. I try that too but sometimes I am so very tired that I can’t sleep. 🙂
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You’re welcome. Oh no! So sorry to hear that.
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Don’t worry, it doesn’t happen very frequently.
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Nice haiku sequence
Happy you dropped by my blog today
Much💛love
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Thanks, Gillena. My pleasure. 💙
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The moon was certainly loitering here last night. What a unique image. I enjoyed the allusions to Morpheus, too.
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Thanks so much, K. 💙
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‘the lone moon loiters’ -that line really lingers in the mind after reading it.
Beautifully crafted haiku sequence.
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Thanks a lot, Marion.
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Musing is like dreaming Punam, wonderful!
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Indeed, Rob. Thank you.
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Parched eyes–that’s such a great description of insomnia. (K)
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Thanks a lot, Kerfe.
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Beautiful, Punam – and the last line quite a surprise, bringing a sigh of relief and sending me back to read again… to re-evaluate the loneliness I’d presumed.
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Thanks a lot, Kathy, for your lovely words.
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At least you have lovely thoughts! Often sleeplessness coaxes worrying thoughts. A great quadrille!
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Thanks a lot, Carol.
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I misread the middle verse and now my brain will NOT let it go, basically ruining you lovely lovely words. Anyway, I read it thus, which is an exercise in “add a vowel to completely change the meaning”:
the night is sleepless
and the moron is still sleeping
the lone moon loiters
If you ban me forever, I’ll understand.
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Hahaha! I so loved this! Anyone who can make me laugh and add “meaning” to my words finds a place in my heart. ❤️
Look forward to more such creativity.
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An enchanting piece. Well written quadrille.
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Thanks a lot, Arcadia!
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Love this Punam. Filling sleepless eyes with your loved one’s thoughts.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re always welcome my dear
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So lovely, Punam. Love “the lone moon loiters”!
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Thanks a lot!
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‘the lone moon loiters’ what a lovely image!
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Thanks so much, Stacy!
I couldn’t leave a comment on your post. I really enjoyed your quadrille.
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Beautiful, Punam! Captures it so well 💕🙂
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Thanks a lot, Harmony. ❤️😊
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I love your haikus …they fit well together
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Thanks, Mich. 😊
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Aww
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❤️❤️
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Very well done! I liked this line… my eyes dodge sly sleep…
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Thanks so much, Dwight.
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You are welcome!
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Wow such a beautiful written quadrille. Lovely poem, Punam.
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Thanks so much, dear Kamal. 😊❤️
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Welcome dear Punam 💖💖
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Betwixt… h’m my new favourite word! Beautiful haikus 🙂
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Thanks, Veera. 😊
Exams over?
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Yesss exams are OVER!
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Yayy!! Will catch up with your posts soon. 😀
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Lack of sleep is frustrating, but you found the perfect remedy ❤️
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It does seem so! 😅 Thanks, Ingrid.❤️
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Oh so lovely beautiful!
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Thanks so much, dear.
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Punam – I’m seriously impressed at how many times you used the word sleep in this poem without it sounding the slightest bit awkward. This is excellent!
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David, that’s very kind of you…thank you! ❤️
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Ooh I love this one! It has an elegance to it
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Hey JYP, so good to see you! Thanks for your appreciation. 😊
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I’ve been on a blogging break and starting to get back into it. This piece was awesome – def worth the return to WP
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Thanks once again. Look forward to your posts.
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The loitering moon created within the context of sleep deprivation is glorious, Punam. Amazing write! ❤️
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Glad you liked that image, Jeff. Thanks a lot, my friend. ❤️
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I love love love the first stanza especially
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Worms, thank you so very much. ❤️
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Well done! I love the dew craving eyes, and sleeping morn! ✨💜
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Thanks so much, Pamelap. 😊💙
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You are welcome 🙏🏽✨
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That moment… when sleep won’t come… and the thoughts of a beloved keeps flooding the mind, aight? Certainly it does happen. Absence makes the grow fonder.
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Ha! Absolutely.:)
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Indeed, my friend.
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