
He sits there alone
longing burning bright in his eyes
the cool breeze a balm to his fevered soul
gazing intently into the gloaming
he espies a solitary figure yonder
is it the one he has been waiting for
the one who would make him feel alive
make butterflies sing and the moon blush
or is it just a will-o’-the-wisp
enticing, elusive and ephemeral
a heartbreaking but beautiful dream
that leaves shards of longing he bleeds upon!
Written for Sadje.
Oh so beautiful Punam. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Glad you liked it.
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You’re most welcome my dear
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Nice
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome! 😊
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😊
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Thank you again.
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My pleasure, Ami.
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I’m sure she’s very pleased.
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So she is, Bo.
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Ah, this is so beautifully done Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Radhika.
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Thanks for the reblog, Sadje.
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Waiting on that ideal of the love we want, it only, cause us, even more heartaches…
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What is love without heartache…
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This is beautiful, Punam 💕🙂
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Thanks a lot, Harmony. ❤️😊
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Simply sublime 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Oh, his longing leaps from the page. Beautifully composed, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Chris! ❤️
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My pleasure!
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Such a radiantly charming piece, Punam. Good response to the prompt. 💗💗
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Thank you, Lamittan! ❤️
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Welcome most, my friend. ❤
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In love with your writing. 🧡
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Kritika, you are a sweetheart. ❤️
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😊😍🧡
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🤗❤️😊
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Punam – the dreams we dream… Now to rise up from the waiting and take a step toward the seeking!
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Yes, Val! Time to achieve those dreams.
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A powerful longing indeed! ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! ❤️
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They say all comes to he who waits; he can only hope. A perfect take.
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Indeed, Keith! Thank you!
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Wonderful poem, Punam! ❤ I do hope he gets what he is waiting for! 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl! ❤️ I hope so too. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! ❤️
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beautiful and sad but he waits Punam/ 💖 well done!💖
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So he does, Cindy! Thank you. ❤️🌷
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he’ll get over it 😂 .. welcome! 💖
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I hope he finds the answer to his longings. (K)
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I sure hope so too!
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Deeply beautiful poem Punam, his longing is felt.
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Thanks so much, dear. ❤️🙏🏼
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Wow! What a gorgeous write, and awesome take, Punam!
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Thanks so much, Jeff! ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam! Always. ❤️
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All I’m going to say is (in manner of Joey) “How you doin’?” 😀
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Haha! Still dreaming! 😀
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😀
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consummately amazing
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Thanks so much, Jude.
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Gosh, Punam, this is simply lovely!
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David, thanks so much! ❤️😊
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